Comments received on poems by Li Yanmey
It\'s my birthday
Poetic Licence said:
Congratulations are in order, lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:56
Poetic Licence said:
Congratulations are in order, lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:56
It\'s my birthday
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations. A realization within a poem. Nicely written
March 24th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations. A realization within a poem. Nicely written
March 24th, 2025 04:36
I dream
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that protests war, despots, and tyrants that start them. A good write
March 20th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that protests war, despots, and tyrants that start them. A good write
March 20th, 2025 12:47
I dream
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
Dreams tells us about our thoughts hidden in our unconscious mind. Good write
March 20th, 2025 10:32
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
Dreams tells us about our thoughts hidden in our unconscious mind. Good write
March 20th, 2025 10:32
I look in the mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a nightmare but then a metaphor as well. We all have times when our mirrors are fogged or blackened and we do not see ourselves properly. Very nicely done
March 19th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a nightmare but then a metaphor as well. We all have times when our mirrors are fogged or blackened and we do not see ourselves properly. Very nicely done
March 19th, 2025 10:02
All my life is just a series of coincidences
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trust that is dependent on others. Trust needs to begin with oneself before it reaches others. Nicely done
March 8th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trust that is dependent on others. Trust needs to begin with oneself before it reaches others. Nicely done
March 8th, 2025 09:30
A Letter to the inner little girl
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of talking to oneself and the duality of time and insight thought and action all a duality. Very nice
March 7th, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of talking to oneself and the duality of time and insight thought and action all a duality. Very nice
March 7th, 2025 13:18
to C. Y. (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Transformation occurs at various stages and for various reasons. When it occurs you can\'t fight it go with it metamorphosize ride the back of the butterfly.
March 4th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Transformation occurs at various stages and for various reasons. When it occurs you can\'t fight it go with it metamorphosize ride the back of the butterfly.
March 4th, 2025 04:30
to C. Y. (2)
Cassie58 said:
Hang on to those feelings. There is a great deal of love and concern in your words for a special man. I felt them. I enjoyed reading you today.
March 4th, 2025 03:11
Cassie58 said:
Hang on to those feelings. There is a great deal of love and concern in your words for a special man. I felt them. I enjoyed reading you today.
March 4th, 2025 03:11
Scars on my wrists don’t ache
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can hear the pain in this poem and unlike wrists a soul is hard to scratch. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can hear the pain in this poem and unlike wrists a soul is hard to scratch. Well written
March 3rd, 2025 05:50
Disoders\' trap
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of disillusionment and betrayal in this poem and the anger that goes with it. Strong and powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of disillusionment and betrayal in this poem and the anger that goes with it. Strong and powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 04:58
Game of mind
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to find a way out but always being pulled back to the darkness, as you say you have to keep the fight, very well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to find a way out but always being pulled back to the darkness, as you say you have to keep the fight, very well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 06:10
Game of mind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the tone with the night, it is dark, no light and so is the mood. The regression leaves a sense of resignation that things will change but always come back to how they were. Sad and a feeling of hopelessness. No place to hide is ominous. The only glimmer of hope is the last words keep the fight. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the tone with the night, it is dark, no light and so is the mood. The regression leaves a sense of resignation that things will change but always come back to how they were. Sad and a feeling of hopelessness. No place to hide is ominous. The only glimmer of hope is the last words keep the fight. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:09
Blue night
sorenbarrett said:
It is the confusion in a relationship that gives it flavor. Savor the moment. A lovely write
February 28th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the confusion in a relationship that gives it flavor. Savor the moment. A lovely write
February 28th, 2025 05:54
Moonlight stories: a letter to Ash
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very compassionate, understanding and caring letter, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 11:20
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very compassionate, understanding and caring letter, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 11:20
Do you ever hear the music of the Universe?
sorenbarrett said:
When we focus on something distant we imagine what ever we want and I would hear music in the universe. It\'s vibrations play a celestial music for all. A lovely write.
February 26th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
When we focus on something distant we imagine what ever we want and I would hear music in the universe. It\'s vibrations play a celestial music for all. A lovely write.
February 26th, 2025 18:16
Do you ever hear the music of the Universe?
Lorenz said:
I listen to this music of spheres .
February 26th, 2025 15:34
Lorenz said:
I listen to this music of spheres .
February 26th, 2025 15:34
How can I change my past?
Demar Desu said:
You’re a great poet… I felt this
February 26th, 2025 10:58
Demar Desu said:
You’re a great poet… I felt this
February 26th, 2025 10:58
Moonlight stories: a letter to Aconite
sorenbarrett said:
A atypical love poem that reaches out to the reader. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A atypical love poem that reaches out to the reader. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:12
I\'ve never wanted to feel like this
Poetic Licence said:
A longing to be seen as they are and who they are, powerful write
February 24th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
A longing to be seen as they are and who they are, powerful write
February 24th, 2025 11:26
I\'ve never wanted to feel like this
sorenbarrett said:
A pleading comes from this poem and one wants to say be yourself and nothing more. A heart felt poem
February 24th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
A pleading comes from this poem and one wants to say be yourself and nothing more. A heart felt poem
February 24th, 2025 11:23
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