Comments received on poems by Matthew J. Bays



Our Momentary Journal
RSM0812 said:

Im trying to imagine what the flame represents. Sunlight, warmer temperatures, someone\'s breath? Great read. I really liked it a lot.

February 17th, 2025 13:57

The Ephemeral Mind
Cassie58 said:

Your words and fine imagery allowed my mind to drift. Lovely.

February 16th, 2025 13:13

The Ephemeral Mind
Swarovski20 said:

Great write, for me.

February 16th, 2025 05:23

The Ephemeral Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Like many great works they have many meanings to different people and so does this one. A vague enough canvass to paint my own pictures over this already painted image. This could refer to yet unborn creations of posterity or a legacy of one\'s work. It is lovely enough to deserve a fave in my book.

February 16th, 2025 04:38

The Ephemeral Mind
orchidee said:

Good write M.

February 16th, 2025 02:54

The Ephemeral Mind
Poetic Licence said:

I like this write, i often wonder in those day dream moments are they really forgotten, or have we banked them as seeds that appear down line as a bit more than a day dream, enjoyed the read

February 15th, 2025 21:11

Our Momentary Journal
arqios said:

Liked and Faved, this is the kind of poem one has a fever for for reading 🙏🏻🕊

February 15th, 2025 18:19

Our Momentary Journal
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor poetically expressed in short verses. The imagery fits well and it can be taken more than one way. Very nice.

February 15th, 2025 04:50

Our Momentary Journal
orchidee said:

Good write M.

February 15th, 2025 03:19

Our Momentary Journal
Poetic Licence said:

You get a sense of a troubled night, then in the morning taking a deep breath and trying to push through the day, enjoyed the read

February 15th, 2025 03:09

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arqios said:

Welcome to MPS Matthew 🙏🏻🕊

February 15th, 2025 00:15