Comments received on poems by KTay



Haunted
Poetic Licence said:

A very powerful and very raw write that some people will relate to, full of anger, fear and desperation at happenings of the past, a constant living breathing nightmare they are trapped in, a wonderful write

March 27th, 2025 04:19

Haunted
Diana . said:

I can relate to your poem.
Wish you find a joy in your life ... 🩶

March 26th, 2025 17:54

Haunted
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March 26th, 2025 17:54

Haunted
sorenbarrett said:

Desperation, anger and depression in this dark write. A strong and powerful raw write

March 26th, 2025 12:56

Weathered
Poetic Licence said:

This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read

March 26th, 2025 02:55

Weathered
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 25th, 2025 12:11

Weathered
sorenbarrett said:

I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem

March 25th, 2025 10:49

Medieval Internal
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 23rd, 2025 13:58

Medieval Internal
Poetic Licence said:

A well written and expressed write, getting darker and more passionate as you read through revealing the feeling of feeling dead inside, a great write

March 23rd, 2025 12:02

Medieval Internal
sorenbarrett said:

Well worded and in a medieval setting this poem flows with good rhyme and rhythm. It turns dark and without hope there is nothing worse than being dead inside, a living death. Well done

March 23rd, 2025 10:41

Strategic Narrative
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful write of anger and frustration at religion, suggesting the religious are not just myth but pieces written by the mentally ill, a strong thought provoking write

March 21st, 2025 08:50

Strategic Narrative
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

March 21st, 2025 07:20

Strategic Narrative
sorenbarrett said:

Anger pervades this poem as does disgust for organized religion. It speaks of its stories as not just myth but being written by the mentally ill. Powerful words here.

March 21st, 2025 06:48