Comments received on poems by KTay
Pressure Release
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me brings up thoughts of imprisonment and freedom in waves that circle through life
May 30th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me brings up thoughts of imprisonment and freedom in waves that circle through life
May 30th, 2025 08:45
The Dark Side of the Earth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend. I concur with all that has been said. Beautiful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, my friend. I concur with all that has been said. Beautiful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:49
The Dark Side of the Earth
Poetic Licence said:
Layered in fear and mistrust of the world, feeling vulnerable in a world that feels unfriendly, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:03
Poetic Licence said:
Layered in fear and mistrust of the world, feeling vulnerable in a world that feels unfriendly, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 11:03
The Dark Side of the Earth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of suspicion, lack of trust and fear a poem of paranoia but then we know that things are out there to get us.
May 29th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of suspicion, lack of trust and fear a poem of paranoia but then we know that things are out there to get us.
May 29th, 2025 09:59
End of the Road
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This sings! For that structure and flow alone, a fave. The message is equally worth a fave. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This sings! For that structure and flow alone, a fave. The message is equally worth a fave. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 20:01
Fire Escape
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great poem! KTay. Sorry I have been so absent, my friend. Been a rough few weeks for me and my family. Yesterday we lost our 11 1/2 young puppy. I know we did her right, but it is always a hard decision to make. And the beauty, for me, in reading this poem is that it is speaking about cutting out the triviality and finding what is truly meaningful. Reminds me of the scene from The Crow with Brandon Lee, where his character, Eric Draven, is remembering how he used to look at the things his love (Shelly) used to find amusing as being trivial. But following his death he realized that NOTHING is trivial. Profound, as is this poem. A fave for me. 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great poem! KTay. Sorry I have been so absent, my friend. Been a rough few weeks for me and my family. Yesterday we lost our 11 1/2 young puppy. I know we did her right, but it is always a hard decision to make. And the beauty, for me, in reading this poem is that it is speaking about cutting out the triviality and finding what is truly meaningful. Reminds me of the scene from The Crow with Brandon Lee, where his character, Eric Draven, is remembering how he used to look at the things his love (Shelly) used to find amusing as being trivial. But following his death he realized that NOTHING is trivial. Profound, as is this poem. A fave for me. 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:32
End of the Road
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a inner self confession of all the struggles of the past and regrets, now acknowledging it time to stand up and end the battle, return home back to safety, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 16:09
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a inner self confession of all the struggles of the past and regrets, now acknowledging it time to stand up and end the battle, return home back to safety, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 16:09
End of the Road
sorenbarrett said:
A great write in the literal sense and also if taken metaphorically well done
May 28th, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great write in the literal sense and also if taken metaphorically well done
May 28th, 2025 11:20
Fire Escape
Poetic Licence said:
Often we hang onto possessions that are of no good to us and weigh us down, sometimes we value them more than we do relationships, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
Often we hang onto possessions that are of no good to us and weigh us down, sometimes we value them more than we do relationships, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 04:26
Fire Escape
sorenbarrett said:
This poem flows with the meaning to me of the meaninglessness of possessions in comparison to relationships. A lovely write
May 28th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem flows with the meaning to me of the meaninglessness of possessions in comparison to relationships. A lovely write
May 28th, 2025 03:57
Sea of Madness
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and haunting yet applies to how many are feeling trying to survive in today\'s world, nicely expressed and written
May 25th, 2025 02:47
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and haunting yet applies to how many are feeling trying to survive in today\'s world, nicely expressed and written
May 25th, 2025 02:47
Sea of Madness
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and composed this poem in metaphor speaks to the soul of many. Graphic in its imagery it calls out of the depths. Lovely
May 24th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and composed this poem in metaphor speaks to the soul of many. Graphic in its imagery it calls out of the depths. Lovely
May 24th, 2025 12:59
Shhh
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write that grabs you straight away and carries you in its flow, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:52
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write that grabs you straight away and carries you in its flow, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:52
Shhh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rhythmic, lyrical...this poem draws you in and doesn\'t let go. Gripping and powerful. Well done, KTay! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rhythmic, lyrical...this poem draws you in and doesn\'t let go. Gripping and powerful. Well done, KTay! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 17:42
Shhh
sorenbarrett said:
A metronome beats in the heart of this poem as it drags you along to its end. It becomes hypnotic and takes over the will of the reader. Very nicely written
May 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A metronome beats in the heart of this poem as it drags you along to its end. It becomes hypnotic and takes over the will of the reader. Very nicely written
May 6th, 2025 04:30
ShitTalkers
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and flow to this poem. A message to look at oneself
May 1st, 2025 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and flow to this poem. A message to look at oneself
May 1st, 2025 18:49
The Clock Strikes Done
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not unlike a fellow poet I used to know, who loved to give us rather crass but humorous pieces for our indulgence. It was the night he read a most delicious piece, superbly detailed, to the utter and complete destruction of a computer that I had to ask him in conclusion whether it was fact or fiction. The deadly reality was the former. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 20:17
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not unlike a fellow poet I used to know, who loved to give us rather crass but humorous pieces for our indulgence. It was the night he read a most delicious piece, superbly detailed, to the utter and complete destruction of a computer that I had to ask him in conclusion whether it was fact or fiction. The deadly reality was the former. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 20:17
The Clock Strikes Done
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem flows so well. Well, done my friend. 👏🌹
April 30th, 2025 20:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem flows so well. Well, done my friend. 👏🌹
April 30th, 2025 20:11
The Clock Strikes Done
sorenbarrett said:
Dealing with annoyance in the most direct manner. A fun read
April 30th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
Dealing with annoyance in the most direct manner. A fun read
April 30th, 2025 13:01
Mushy Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
Mushroom hallucinations merge with dreams to take one to places never gone before and thoughts never considered. A lovely read
April 29th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Mushroom hallucinations merge with dreams to take one to places never gone before and thoughts never considered. A lovely read
April 29th, 2025 06:27
The Horror Under The Big Top
sorenbarrett said:
The circus of immolation, theater of terror, presentation of horror. A most interesting write.
April 25th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
The circus of immolation, theater of terror, presentation of horror. A most interesting write.
April 25th, 2025 14:26
The Horror Under The Big Top
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is BOLD BIG TOP AMUSEMENT for me! An excellent job on this, my friend. Seriously, I love it and the the style it was written in...flawless. Really loved this and is most definitely a fave! 🤡👏🌹
April 25th, 2025 14:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is BOLD BIG TOP AMUSEMENT for me! An excellent job on this, my friend. Seriously, I love it and the the style it was written in...flawless. Really loved this and is most definitely a fave! 🤡👏🌹
April 25th, 2025 14:10
Inner Critic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That inner critic can go \"fuck off\". I need to tell mine to do the same thing, sometimes. Really felt this, KTay. Love it. 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That inner critic can go \"fuck off\". I need to tell mine to do the same thing, sometimes. Really felt this, KTay. Love it. 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 17:12
Inner Critic
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear building tension and anxiety over various stressors both internal and external. This leads to an explosion that is about to happen at the end. A great deal of emotion is expressed and strongly felt by the reader. A most powerful write
April 24th, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear building tension and anxiety over various stressors both internal and external. This leads to an explosion that is about to happen at the end. A great deal of emotion is expressed and strongly felt by the reader. A most powerful write
April 24th, 2025 16:09
Dilapidated Self
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful analogy in a poem that unfolds its content rapidly. It never lets go, from beginning to end. \"Spiders keep the corners / Of / the attic space No light / Injecting in their poisons / Paralyzing me sometimes\". Loved those lines in particular. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
April 23rd, 2025 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful analogy in a poem that unfolds its content rapidly. It never lets go, from beginning to end. \"Spiders keep the corners / Of / the attic space No light / Injecting in their poisons / Paralyzing me sometimes\". Loved those lines in particular. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
April 23rd, 2025 20:52
Dilapidated Self
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy in this poem. Well imaged and good read
April 23rd, 2025 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy in this poem. Well imaged and good read
April 23rd, 2025 17:08
Sleep Terrors 3
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Sleep Terrors 3
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
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