Comments received on poems by KTay
Shhh
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write that grabs you straight away and carries you in its flow, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:52
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write that grabs you straight away and carries you in its flow, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:52
Shhh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rhythmic, lyrical...this poem draws you in and doesn\'t let go. Gripping and powerful. Well done, KTay! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rhythmic, lyrical...this poem draws you in and doesn\'t let go. Gripping and powerful. Well done, KTay! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 17:42
Shhh
sorenbarrett said:
A metronome beats in the heart of this poem as it drags you along to its end. It becomes hypnotic and takes over the will of the reader. Very nicely written
May 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A metronome beats in the heart of this poem as it drags you along to its end. It becomes hypnotic and takes over the will of the reader. Very nicely written
May 6th, 2025 04:30
ShitTalkers
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and flow to this poem. A message to look at oneself
May 1st, 2025 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and flow to this poem. A message to look at oneself
May 1st, 2025 18:49
The Clock Strikes Done
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not unlike a fellow poet I used to know, who loved to give us rather crass but humorous pieces for our indulgence. It was the night he read a most delicious piece, superbly detailed, to the utter and complete destruction of a computer that I had to ask him in conclusion whether it was fact or fiction. The deadly reality was the former. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 20:17
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not unlike a fellow poet I used to know, who loved to give us rather crass but humorous pieces for our indulgence. It was the night he read a most delicious piece, superbly detailed, to the utter and complete destruction of a computer that I had to ask him in conclusion whether it was fact or fiction. The deadly reality was the former. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 20:17
The Clock Strikes Done
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem flows so well. Well, done my friend. 👏🌹
April 30th, 2025 20:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem flows so well. Well, done my friend. 👏🌹
April 30th, 2025 20:11
The Clock Strikes Done
sorenbarrett said:
Dealing with annoyance in the most direct manner. A fun read
April 30th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
Dealing with annoyance in the most direct manner. A fun read
April 30th, 2025 13:01
Mushy Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
Mushroom hallucinations merge with dreams to take one to places never gone before and thoughts never considered. A lovely read
April 29th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Mushroom hallucinations merge with dreams to take one to places never gone before and thoughts never considered. A lovely read
April 29th, 2025 06:27
The Horror Under The Big Top
sorenbarrett said:
The circus of immolation, theater of terror, presentation of horror. A most interesting write.
April 25th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
The circus of immolation, theater of terror, presentation of horror. A most interesting write.
April 25th, 2025 14:26
The Horror Under The Big Top
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is BOLD BIG TOP AMUSEMENT for me! An excellent job on this, my friend. Seriously, I love it and the the style it was written in...flawless. Really loved this and is most definitely a fave! 🤡👏🌹
April 25th, 2025 14:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is BOLD BIG TOP AMUSEMENT for me! An excellent job on this, my friend. Seriously, I love it and the the style it was written in...flawless. Really loved this and is most definitely a fave! 🤡👏🌹
April 25th, 2025 14:10
Inner Critic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That inner critic can go \"fuck off\". I need to tell mine to do the same thing, sometimes. Really felt this, KTay. Love it. 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That inner critic can go \"fuck off\". I need to tell mine to do the same thing, sometimes. Really felt this, KTay. Love it. 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 17:12
Inner Critic
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear building tension and anxiety over various stressors both internal and external. This leads to an explosion that is about to happen at the end. A great deal of emotion is expressed and strongly felt by the reader. A most powerful write
April 24th, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear building tension and anxiety over various stressors both internal and external. This leads to an explosion that is about to happen at the end. A great deal of emotion is expressed and strongly felt by the reader. A most powerful write
April 24th, 2025 16:09
Dilapidated Self
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful analogy in a poem that unfolds its content rapidly. It never lets go, from beginning to end. \"Spiders keep the corners / Of / the attic space No light / Injecting in their poisons / Paralyzing me sometimes\". Loved those lines in particular. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
April 23rd, 2025 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful analogy in a poem that unfolds its content rapidly. It never lets go, from beginning to end. \"Spiders keep the corners / Of / the attic space No light / Injecting in their poisons / Paralyzing me sometimes\". Loved those lines in particular. Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
April 23rd, 2025 20:52
Dilapidated Self
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy in this poem. Well imaged and good read
April 23rd, 2025 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy in this poem. Well imaged and good read
April 23rd, 2025 17:08
Sleep Terrors 3
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Sleep Terrors 3
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
Sleep Terrors 3
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most wonderful poem. My second time reading today and it gets better each time. Wonderful job, KTay! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most wonderful poem. My second time reading today and it gets better each time. Wonderful job, KTay! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:42
Sleep Terrors 3
sorenbarrett said:
This poem immerses the reader in the terror itself. Vivid in its imagery it evokes feelings of terror. Well written
April 17th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem immerses the reader in the terror itself. Vivid in its imagery it evokes feelings of terror. Well written
April 17th, 2025 07:11
Aphotic Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
One pretends to be something else to hide the true self sometimes out of shame sometimes just shyness. I hear in this poem a plea to be oneself. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
One pretends to be something else to hide the true self sometimes out of shame sometimes just shyness. I hear in this poem a plea to be oneself. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 04:56
Aphotic Freedom
Poetic Licence said:
Many reflections and dark thoughts hidden behind the night mask, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:39
Poetic Licence said:
Many reflections and dark thoughts hidden behind the night mask, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:39
Aphotic Freedom
Mourgana of the Fey said:
The short lines make for a powerful strong canvas where many a reflection can be seen in this dark pool of wonder.
April 16th, 2025 02:17
Mourgana of the Fey said:
The short lines make for a powerful strong canvas where many a reflection can be seen in this dark pool of wonder.
April 16th, 2025 02:17
The Barring Pane
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...you have described my home...my space. I get this poem, my friend. Well done on this dark, poetic expression. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...you have described my home...my space. I get this poem, my friend. Well done on this dark, poetic expression. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 16:32
The Barring Pane
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and deep write of living in the night. where all the demons come out to play with their toys, your heart and mind, as dark as this write is, for some it is very real, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and deep write of living in the night. where all the demons come out to play with their toys, your heart and mind, as dark as this write is, for some it is very real, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 13:13
The Barring Pane
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and full of shadows this work speaks to the night. Well done
April 15th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and full of shadows this work speaks to the night. Well done
April 15th, 2025 12:56
Paper Flowers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The use of colors as an expression of emotions is brilliant, my friend. I very much related to this! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The use of colors as an expression of emotions is brilliant, my friend. I very much related to this! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:18
Paper Flowers
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this idea. Maybe my own secret garden deserves some flowers...some growth or healing. I think I\'ll visit this poem often, maybe make a flower out of paper instead of papercuts. Thank you for writing this poem
April 14th, 2025 11:10
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this idea. Maybe my own secret garden deserves some flowers...some growth or healing. I think I\'ll visit this poem often, maybe make a flower out of paper instead of papercuts. Thank you for writing this poem
April 14th, 2025 11:10
Paper Flowers
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of colors in this poem to signify different emotions. This poem runs the gambit and speaks from the heart. Nicely done
April 14th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of colors in this poem to signify different emotions. This poem runs the gambit and speaks from the heart. Nicely done
April 14th, 2025 10:13
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