Comments received on poems by jaiden_noviqon
The Purpose That Lives in Our Shadow
Mourgana of the Fey said:
What I liked about this poem is that it described a process like the journey of the chrysalis from the budding cocoon to the multi winged butterfly. Also I liked that you used the shadow, the none, the emptiness in and between things . For it to become whole again. The none and the all both come from the same principle, I enjoyed the read !
April 29th, 2025 01:52
Mourgana of the Fey said:
What I liked about this poem is that it described a process like the journey of the chrysalis from the budding cocoon to the multi winged butterfly. Also I liked that you used the shadow, the none, the emptiness in and between things . For it to become whole again. The none and the all both come from the same principle, I enjoyed the read !
April 29th, 2025 01:52
Oppression Upon Its Own Reflection
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This is an intriguing poem. You have build together a web of words that is a tapestry of interwoven metaphors. There is much collective suffering going on , global and galactic where the blood songs are still heard and remembered. The unresolved is by no means meaningless. The rite of penmanship can capture some of this void. Thank you for sharing these reflections!
April 29th, 2025 01:48
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This is an intriguing poem. You have build together a web of words that is a tapestry of interwoven metaphors. There is much collective suffering going on , global and galactic where the blood songs are still heard and remembered. The unresolved is by no means meaningless. The rite of penmanship can capture some of this void. Thank you for sharing these reflections!
April 29th, 2025 01:48
Oppression Upon Its Own Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting concept and a fun read
April 28th, 2025 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting concept and a fun read
April 28th, 2025 17:34
The Purpose That Lives in Our Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely composition and amalgamation of all that makes us up wrapped up in a poem. A great work.
April 19th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely composition and amalgamation of all that makes us up wrapped up in a poem. A great work.
April 19th, 2025 13:31
