Comments received on poems by Luv3.em
CAN I COME HOME THIS CHRISTMAS
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and powerful write over their unhappiness in their current life and the ongoing struggles they face, wishing to return to what they now see as better days, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and powerful write over their unhappiness in their current life and the ongoing struggles they face, wishing to return to what they now see as better days, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 05:15
CAN I COME HOME THIS CHRISTMAS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of the bleakness of the present and future and regrets over the past and a longing to return to what were better days. Raw and well written it packs a punch.
May 16th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of the bleakness of the present and future and regrets over the past and a longing to return to what were better days. Raw and well written it packs a punch.
May 16th, 2025 04:54
BURNING BUILDINGS AND SANDPIPERS
sorenbarrett said:
A society built on sex and violence where over stimulation barely gets attention. Rough and raw hard and hurtful a tough read well done.
May 15th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A society built on sex and violence where over stimulation barely gets attention. Rough and raw hard and hurtful a tough read well done.
May 15th, 2025 05:12
