Comments received on poems by Jeron Arendse



Invisible Ink (read between the lines)
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write of the wearing of the mask that many people do, protecting their vulnerability and hiding their pain and depression inside, pretending to the world everything is ok when inside they are falling apart, nicely expressed and written

June 26th, 2025 21:47

Invisible Ink (read between the lines)
sorenbarrett said:

Changing the obvious to the invisible not an easy task but seen as necessary so as to not be vulnerable. Well done


June 26th, 2025 19:51

Sanctioned Space (or: How to Disappear While Still Being Marked Present)
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 23rd, 2025 20:34

Sanctioned Space (or: How to Disappear While Still Being Marked Present)
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️

June 23rd, 2025 19:11

Sanctioned Space (or: How to Disappear While Still Being Marked Present)
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that feels surreal and of a difference place. Well done

June 23rd, 2025 15:53