Comments received on poems by Acheel
ONEIRIC HYMN
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in classic style with wording and structure that follows from a different era. It is very nicely imaged with some great lines. (I witnessed the sky slowly strip.) The flow is hypnotic and has the feel of a love poem. All in all a fave
September 24th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in classic style with wording and structure that follows from a different era. It is very nicely imaged with some great lines. (I witnessed the sky slowly strip.) The flow is hypnotic and has the feel of a love poem. All in all a fave
September 24th, 2025 04:35
At Eternity\'s Gate
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of the mirror as the court jester the only one allowed to tell it as it is
September 20th, 2025 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of the mirror as the court jester the only one allowed to tell it as it is
September 20th, 2025 18:56
BRIDE OF SHIPS
Poetic Licence said:
That is some journey and write, some lovely lines and imagery in the writing, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
That is some journey and write, some lovely lines and imagery in the writing, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:36
BRIDE OF SHIPS
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite the journey full of vivid imagery it took me through many places. Very nice
July 10th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite the journey full of vivid imagery it took me through many places. Very nice
July 10th, 2025 04:04
