Comments received on poems by Acheel
DAWNING PERCUSSION ᨑ WEST ᨑ
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses numerology where 11 becomes a magical number, the one the indivisible number of God the three the trinity, seven a sacred and mystical number indicative of introspection nine the number of completion as you note. A most symbolic write that delves deep beyond the words. A fave
October 2nd, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses numerology where 11 becomes a magical number, the one the indivisible number of God the three the trinity, seven a sacred and mystical number indicative of introspection nine the number of completion as you note. A most symbolic write that delves deep beyond the words. A fave
October 2nd, 2025 04:01
ONEIRIC HYMN
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in classic style with wording and structure that follows from a different era. It is very nicely imaged with some great lines. (I witnessed the sky slowly strip.) The flow is hypnotic and has the feel of a love poem. All in all a fave
September 24th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in classic style with wording and structure that follows from a different era. It is very nicely imaged with some great lines. (I witnessed the sky slowly strip.) The flow is hypnotic and has the feel of a love poem. All in all a fave
September 24th, 2025 04:35
Dream Alchemy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins in calm and proceeds to gray ground and then the bees, a portent perchance? A most interesting mood set here one of balance teetering on the fulcrum and then the unknown. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins in calm and proceeds to gray ground and then the bees, a portent perchance? A most interesting mood set here one of balance teetering on the fulcrum and then the unknown. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 05:51
At Eternity\'s Gate
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of the mirror as the court jester the only one allowed to tell it as it is
September 20th, 2025 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of the mirror as the court jester the only one allowed to tell it as it is
September 20th, 2025 18:56
AT THE OLD TAVERN
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens with a great set of lines and metaphor that carries through the poem. The use of curious wording gives an old time poetic flare to the poem. It hides in its lines deep wisdom yes indeed are we not all prostitutes selling ourselves to make our daily living. Sexual inuendoes taunt the reader in this comparison. Very well done and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens with a great set of lines and metaphor that carries through the poem. The use of curious wording gives an old time poetic flare to the poem. It hides in its lines deep wisdom yes indeed are we not all prostitutes selling ourselves to make our daily living. Sexual inuendoes taunt the reader in this comparison. Very well done and a fave
September 16th, 2025 04:26
METAPOETICS— RECLUSE AT THE HAUNT
sorenbarrett said:
Dark this poem presents thought fragments that build into the disturbance of chaos. Very nice
September 11th, 2025 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Dark this poem presents thought fragments that build into the disturbance of chaos. Very nice
September 11th, 2025 18:44
Metapoetics
sorenbarrett said:
Such lines that fall like ripe fruit in most classic form it speaks Nobel images. Lovely most well done
September 10th, 2025 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
Such lines that fall like ripe fruit in most classic form it speaks Nobel images. Lovely most well done
September 10th, 2025 13:25
DA DUM DA
sorenbarrett said:
Now that was quite creative and clever a poem in meter with no words. In that poetry to me is emotion this was very interesting. Loved it
September 8th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Now that was quite creative and clever a poem in meter with no words. In that poetry to me is emotion this was very interesting. Loved it
September 8th, 2025 04:56
UPCOMING
sorenbarrett said:
And a great fragment it is. Very poetic. Loved it a fave
September 7th, 2025 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
And a great fragment it is. Very poetic. Loved it a fave
September 7th, 2025 11:21
PENANCE
sorenbarrett said:
Iambic meter like the waves measures a poetic merit. But then are not all prophets and poets mad? A lovely write and a fave
September 6th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
Iambic meter like the waves measures a poetic merit. But then are not all prophets and poets mad? A lovely write and a fave
September 6th, 2025 06:47
SEASONED NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Love and spice a good combination a most artistic write.
August 3rd, 2025 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
Love and spice a good combination a most artistic write.
August 3rd, 2025 18:27
BRIDE OF SHIPS
Poetic Licence said:
That is some journey and write, some lovely lines and imagery in the writing, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
That is some journey and write, some lovely lines and imagery in the writing, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:36
BRIDE OF SHIPS
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite the journey full of vivid imagery it took me through many places. Very nice
July 10th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite the journey full of vivid imagery it took me through many places. Very nice
July 10th, 2025 04:04
NIGHTLY STRINGS \"NOCTURNES\"
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS this poem is reminiscent of a most classical form and as a type of soliloquy speaks the writers thoughts and musings. Very nice
June 29th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS this poem is reminiscent of a most classical form and as a type of soliloquy speaks the writers thoughts and musings. Very nice
June 29th, 2025 04:51
