Comments received on poems by Betty Miller



Beyond these walls
Poetic Licence said:

A sad, touching and heartfelt write that is so relatable to me, neglected and abusive background and the pressures of having to grow up before their time. Then the long dark tunnel it takes you into and how it carries with you through your life, wishing you all the very best

July 16th, 2025 01:14

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Tony36 said:

BRAVO

July 15th, 2025 18:37

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Samuel Maximilian said:

Beautiful expression of a heartbreakingly tragic reality. It almost feels wrong for me to like the poem so much: it makes me feel like I\'m liking the vulnerability of another human being. What a strange thing poetry is. Bravo on the writing!

July 15th, 2025 17:11

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sorenbarrett said:

Sad and tragic events of abuse and abandonment can contribute to depression. In this poem is a story of early loss and harsh treatment that combined with the stress of performing adult tasks of caring for younger siblings as a child have left a continued desire for a mother that was never there. A heart wrenching poem of sadness. Well written

July 15th, 2025 16:13

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Caring dove said:

That’s sad sorry you had to go through that

Childhood can really affect us even into adulthood ( sometimes )

We all need to feel loved and wanted

Take care

July 15th, 2025 15:02

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Betty, this is breathtaking in its bravery and craft. The clarity with which you walk us through trauma, silence, resilience, and still—hope—is something rare and real. That final couplet hit me hard. You’re still here. And yes, a future does wait beyond that wall. Well done on this. 🌹👏 Welcome to MPS!

July 15th, 2025 14:53