Comments received on poems by juliette
unforgiven
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a powerful and positive write, determined not to let the past hurt effect who they are and what they want to do, a hard thing to do, over time healing can begin , nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 12:01
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a powerful and positive write, determined not to let the past hurt effect who they are and what they want to do, a hard thing to do, over time healing can begin , nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 12:01
unforgiven
sorenbarrett said:
So difficult to jump from the logical to the emotional. Well written
July 23rd, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
So difficult to jump from the logical to the emotional. Well written
July 23rd, 2025 11:39
struggle
Poetic Licence said:
A clevery crafted write using the analogy of depressing as the sea, and it does feel like that, sometimes just drifting, sometimes swaying from side to side and sometimes feeling like you are drowning and there is no one to save you, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
A clevery crafted write using the analogy of depressing as the sea, and it does feel like that, sometimes just drifting, sometimes swaying from side to side and sometimes feeling like you are drowning and there is no one to save you, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 06:23
struggle
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and allegory well used in this poem of despair. Cleverly pursued with different aspects of depression and its relationship to the sea and its creatures is a continual aspect of this poem. A fave
July 21st, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and allegory well used in this poem of despair. Cleverly pursued with different aspects of depression and its relationship to the sea and its creatures is a continual aspect of this poem. A fave
July 21st, 2025 04:05
struggle
nephilim56 said:
enjoyed the read, depression I find is like the tides, waxing and waning
July 21st, 2025 02:34
nephilim56 said:
enjoyed the read, depression I find is like the tides, waxing and waning
July 21st, 2025 02:34
