Comments received on poems by MooreRaynold



Gone Are We
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write of the tale of unfolding fate and the toll it takes, enjoyed the read

July 31st, 2025 05:27

Gone Are We
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of fate that takes its toll. Nicely written in good rhyme and flow. Well done

July 31st, 2025 03:45

Feign Appearance
arqios said:

Wow, this poem really nails that universal tug-of-war between craving total control and craving real connection; feeling love’s “bitter taste,” wishing for the void, then discovering that our darkest moments can fuel our art. It’s like finding peace on a rainy Sunday afternoon with your favourite record playing in the background.🕊️🙏🏻

July 30th, 2025 08:23

Feign Appearance
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely thought out write offering a glimpse of light to those feeling the effects of loneliness, nicely expressed and written

July 30th, 2025 05:41

Feign Appearance
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written in rhyme with good flow this poem offers hope to those that feel alone. Well done

July 30th, 2025 03:57