Comments received on poems by Ja'Quan Shepard
Eye 2 Eye
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the reader to think about meaning and feeling. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2025 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the reader to think about meaning and feeling. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2025 20:47
Emotionally Unavailable
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where understanding comes with being an insider. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where understanding comes with being an insider. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:07
Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rhythm to the lines that fit the rhyme. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rhythm to the lines that fit the rhyme. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 04:18
Lonely
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of mistrust of people leaving them to feel isolated and lonely, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:25
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of mistrust of people leaving them to feel isolated and lonely, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:25
Going
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a flow of word associations with rumbling rhymes. A fun read
August 15th, 2025 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a flow of word associations with rumbling rhymes. A fun read
August 15th, 2025 19:28
prey(predators)
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this write that takes one though strange turns and beyond imaginations limits.
August 14th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this write that takes one though strange turns and beyond imaginations limits.
August 14th, 2025 12:14
Lockers
Poetic Licence said:
I have been readin your work for a few days now, I find it very interesting but am still trying to work out the style, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
I have been readin your work for a few days now, I find it very interesting but am still trying to work out the style, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:32
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Here various association run in a torrent bringing emotions also associated with the words. An interesting technique
August 12th, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Here various association run in a torrent bringing emotions also associated with the words. An interesting technique
August 12th, 2025 10:00
Titanic
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sinking pervades this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sinking pervades this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 13:50
Reaper
Poetic Licence said:
He will come calling at one time or another, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 10:09
Poetic Licence said:
He will come calling at one time or another, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 10:09
Reaper
sorenbarrett said:
One thing for sure we all have to go sooner or latter. A good read
August 10th, 2025 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
One thing for sure we all have to go sooner or latter. A good read
August 10th, 2025 10:04
Me vs Me
sorenbarrett said:
Feels like a rap in a way. A most interesting write
August 9th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Feels like a rap in a way. A most interesting write
August 9th, 2025 11:55
treason
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, written in a way and style I am not familier with, still trying to decode it, nice to see something different
August 9th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, written in a way and style I am not familier with, still trying to decode it, nice to see something different
August 9th, 2025 11:26
treason
sorenbarrett said:
A jargon that I am not too familiar with but that sets the tone for the poem. Most interesting
August 9th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A jargon that I am not too familiar with but that sets the tone for the poem. Most interesting
August 9th, 2025 04:00
