Comments received on poems by Ja'Quan Shepard
Pistol pop
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the ring of gangster rap to it. It seems to be talking about offing someone. Well done
November 26th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the ring of gangster rap to it. It seems to be talking about offing someone. Well done
November 26th, 2025 04:53
Reasoning
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a rap meter to the rhyme. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 19:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a rap meter to the rhyme. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 19:44
We come
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a rap in that it has a great beat to it. Not sure about sleeping in a wet bed at the end though. A good read
November 24th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a rap in that it has a great beat to it. Not sure about sleeping in a wet bed at the end though. A good read
November 24th, 2025 04:13
Arousing
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to distinguish between those known and unknown and the differences between and the similarities of how one is treated. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to distinguish between those known and unknown and the differences between and the similarities of how one is treated. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 12:21
Journals
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hectic feel to this poem with its meter and repeated lines. It flows ever downward like rushing water
November 22nd, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hectic feel to this poem with its meter and repeated lines. It flows ever downward like rushing water
November 22nd, 2025 03:43
Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a prayer, a plea. Nicely written with flow.
November 21st, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a prayer, a plea. Nicely written with flow.
November 21st, 2025 03:43
Pick or choose
sorenbarrett said:
Words that we often use interchangeably but that do have a bit of a distinction. Nicely employed in this poem. Well done
November 20th, 2025 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
Words that we often use interchangeably but that do have a bit of a distinction. Nicely employed in this poem. Well done
November 20th, 2025 13:09
Gimmick
sorenbarrett said:
Colloquial in nature it reveals the author in street poetry. A budding bard of the road. Nice
November 19th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Colloquial in nature it reveals the author in street poetry. A budding bard of the road. Nice
November 19th, 2025 03:36
The man
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of relationship not working and the fallout from it. Well said
November 18th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of relationship not working and the fallout from it. Well said
November 18th, 2025 13:08
For a song
sorenbarrett said:
Got the rhyme and the beat but my ignorance took away the meat. I got the bread of what you said but the filling fled. A most interesting poem.
November 17th, 2025 20:55
sorenbarrett said:
Got the rhyme and the beat but my ignorance took away the meat. I got the bread of what you said but the filling fled. A most interesting poem.
November 17th, 2025 20:55
2k
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from the streets. It\'s spittin. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from the streets. It\'s spittin. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:03
Forge valley
sorenbarrett said:
I have to admit that despite several readings I still lack understanding of this poem other that in real or symbolic manner it refers to death. Most interesting
November 15th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
I have to admit that despite several readings I still lack understanding of this poem other that in real or symbolic manner it refers to death. Most interesting
November 15th, 2025 03:45
Type
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds threatening and overpowering. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds threatening and overpowering. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 17:04
Muscle
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop beat to it and reads like a battle rap. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This has a hip hop beat to it and reads like a battle rap. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:10
Lover Boy
sorenbarrett said:
This a type of soliloquy asks the questions but receives no answers. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This a type of soliloquy asks the questions but receives no answers. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 04:20
queen of sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully melancholic it drips with sadness and sorrow. Well done
November 4th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully melancholic it drips with sadness and sorrow. Well done
November 4th, 2025 04:09
Dark side
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of loss to me and the need for company. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 21:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of loss to me and the need for company. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 21:23
Alright
sorenbarrett said:
This piece relates its story in short word combinations, broken phrases and images. A most interesting piece
October 21st, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This piece relates its story in short word combinations, broken phrases and images. A most interesting piece
October 21st, 2025 04:12
tougher test
sorenbarrett said:
What\'s next is the guess of what rhyming word will come up and what turn the story will take. A good read.
October 16th, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
What\'s next is the guess of what rhyming word will come up and what turn the story will take. A good read.
October 16th, 2025 13:19
Eye 2 Eye
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the reader to think about meaning and feeling. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2025 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the reader to think about meaning and feeling. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2025 20:47
Emotionally Unavailable
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where understanding comes with being an insider. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where understanding comes with being an insider. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:07
Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rhythm to the lines that fit the rhyme. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rhythm to the lines that fit the rhyme. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 04:18
Lonely
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of mistrust of people leaving them to feel isolated and lonely, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:25
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of mistrust of people leaving them to feel isolated and lonely, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:25
Going
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a flow of word associations with rumbling rhymes. A fun read
August 15th, 2025 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a flow of word associations with rumbling rhymes. A fun read
August 15th, 2025 19:28
prey(predators)
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this write that takes one though strange turns and beyond imaginations limits.
August 14th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this write that takes one though strange turns and beyond imaginations limits.
August 14th, 2025 12:14
Lockers
Poetic Licence said:
I have been readin your work for a few days now, I find it very interesting but am still trying to work out the style, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
I have been readin your work for a few days now, I find it very interesting but am still trying to work out the style, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:32
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