Comments received on poems by Jyoti Verma



Artificial Rain- A Plea for Nature
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write about how man\'s efforts to improve nature occur with a cost that often makes things worse not better overall. Acceptance is something man needs to learn and how to live in harmony not at war with nature.

October 28th, 2025 03:57

She is the Foundation
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem incorporating so many elements of Hinduism and its gods. Loved the feel and crafting of god elements into a mother figure. Most lovely

October 14th, 2025 04:02

Love\'s Eternal Song
Poetic Licence said:

This has a very calming, soothing feel to the read, which I found very enjoyable

October 10th, 2025 16:18

Love\'s Eternal Song
sorenbarrett said:

It is most interesting how festivals create moods and leave feelings symbolizing myths and past events. Nicely written

October 10th, 2025 12:40

Earth Song
Deepak Vohra said:

Really beautiful poem!

October 7th, 2025 04:59

Sailing, Rooting, Rising — The Melody of Life”
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of carpe diem nicely said

October 7th, 2025 04:09

All of Us!
sorenbarrett said:

A noble message sent forth in this poem of equality. Nicely stated

October 5th, 2025 10:28

Chains in the Cubicle
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a good sense of rhythm and meter with its rhyme making it flow well. Nicely done

September 29th, 2025 14:31

Why I chose you,Ma?
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful words of belonging in a poem transcending worlds. Nicely penned

September 21st, 2025 07:29

Earth Song
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely written a lovely thought oh that it were true and that people would respect and take care of the earth instead of rob it and steal its beauty. A lovely write

September 13th, 2025 11:50