Comments received on poems by Jyoti Verma
What is Life Given For?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of positivity, looking for the brighter side, a faith in good and belief that all things are for the best. Lovely in nice rhyme and good meter.
November 1st, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of positivity, looking for the brighter side, a faith in good and belief that all things are for the best. Lovely in nice rhyme and good meter.
November 1st, 2025 06:15
Rays of Renewal : The Song of A Sustainable Earth
Paul Bell said:
There are humans out there doing great work improving nature, unfortunately there are Governments who know what they\'re doing and carry on regardless.
I do think nature is fighting back, and humans will get her full wrath at some point.
October 30th, 2025 09:09
Paul Bell said:
There are humans out there doing great work improving nature, unfortunately there are Governments who know what they\'re doing and carry on regardless.
I do think nature is fighting back, and humans will get her full wrath at some point.
October 30th, 2025 09:09
Rays of Renewal : The Song of A Sustainable Earth
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write regarding the planet. It speaks to management and our effect on the planet. I have long viewed humans as part of nature and what we do is part of the ecosystem how some people have grown so used to our destruction and changes that they prefer concrete and glass as well as plastic to wood, stone, clay. They prefer plastic flowers to real one and pictures on the screen to scenery outside. Long after we are gone the planet will find a way to return to a state that forgets us. Don\'t get me wrong I am of the older school that prefers the natural world and what it has to offer.
October 30th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write regarding the planet. It speaks to management and our effect on the planet. I have long viewed humans as part of nature and what we do is part of the ecosystem how some people have grown so used to our destruction and changes that they prefer concrete and glass as well as plastic to wood, stone, clay. They prefer plastic flowers to real one and pictures on the screen to scenery outside. Long after we are gone the planet will find a way to return to a state that forgets us. Don\'t get me wrong I am of the older school that prefers the natural world and what it has to offer.
October 30th, 2025 08:24
Artificial Rain- A Plea for Nature
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about how man\'s efforts to improve nature occur with a cost that often makes things worse not better overall. Acceptance is something man needs to learn and how to live in harmony not at war with nature.
October 28th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about how man\'s efforts to improve nature occur with a cost that often makes things worse not better overall. Acceptance is something man needs to learn and how to live in harmony not at war with nature.
October 28th, 2025 03:57
She is the Foundation
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem incorporating so many elements of Hinduism and its gods. Loved the feel and crafting of god elements into a mother figure. Most lovely
October 14th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem incorporating so many elements of Hinduism and its gods. Loved the feel and crafting of god elements into a mother figure. Most lovely
October 14th, 2025 04:02
Love\'s Eternal Song
Poetic Licence said:
This has a very calming, soothing feel to the read, which I found very enjoyable
October 10th, 2025 16:18
Poetic Licence said:
This has a very calming, soothing feel to the read, which I found very enjoyable
October 10th, 2025 16:18
Love\'s Eternal Song
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting how festivals create moods and leave feelings symbolizing myths and past events. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is most interesting how festivals create moods and leave feelings symbolizing myths and past events. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 12:40
Sailing, Rooting, Rising — The Melody of Life”
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of carpe diem nicely said
October 7th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of carpe diem nicely said
October 7th, 2025 04:09
All of Us!
sorenbarrett said:
A noble message sent forth in this poem of equality. Nicely stated
October 5th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A noble message sent forth in this poem of equality. Nicely stated
October 5th, 2025 10:28
Chains in the Cubicle
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a good sense of rhythm and meter with its rhyme making it flow well. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a good sense of rhythm and meter with its rhyme making it flow well. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:31
Why I chose you,Ma?
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of belonging in a poem transcending worlds. Nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of belonging in a poem transcending worlds. Nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:29
Earth Song
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a lovely thought oh that it were true and that people would respect and take care of the earth instead of rob it and steal its beauty. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a lovely thought oh that it were true and that people would respect and take care of the earth instead of rob it and steal its beauty. A lovely write
September 13th, 2025 11:50
