Comments received on poems by white lily lament
politicalcorrectness?
sorenbarrett said:
When the the two become extreme they become the same Fascists and Communists the right becomes the left and the left the right both rule with oppression. It is meant to be no choice only the magicians choice where it matters not what you choose it always comes up with what the guiding power wants. Illusion is the name of the game. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
When the the two become extreme they become the same Fascists and Communists the right becomes the left and the left the right both rule with oppression. It is meant to be no choice only the magicians choice where it matters not what you choose it always comes up with what the guiding power wants. Illusion is the name of the game. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 03:53
politicalcorrectness?
Doggerel Dave said:
As I read this, you argue that there\'s no difference between them. Correct?
Brave effort.
September 20th, 2025 02:53
Doggerel Dave said:
As I read this, you argue that there\'s no difference between them. Correct?
Brave effort.
September 20th, 2025 02:53
plastic world
Paul Bell said:
Not a lot has changed since year dot.
I\'m always amazed when dumb old guys have an argument and millions of common people die over it.
I\'m waiting for the time when the common people utter the words. \'\'Not my war gov.\'\'
September 19th, 2025 06:19
Paul Bell said:
Not a lot has changed since year dot.
I\'m always amazed when dumb old guys have an argument and millions of common people die over it.
I\'m waiting for the time when the common people utter the words. \'\'Not my war gov.\'\'
September 19th, 2025 06:19
plastic world
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a critique of the system we live in. The evils of capitalism exposed in poetic form. A lovely write.
September 19th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a critique of the system we live in. The evils of capitalism exposed in poetic form. A lovely write.
September 19th, 2025 06:16
My nation of Prozac
sorenbarrett said:
Truly existential this poem proclaims the search for self and identity where external anchors are eroded and all that is left is the internal. Nicely done.
September 19th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Truly existential this poem proclaims the search for self and identity where external anchors are eroded and all that is left is the internal. Nicely done.
September 19th, 2025 03:49
My nation of Prozac
rebellion_in_sanity said:
One of most unpretentious howl in the vaccum- lament for the unfulfilled dreams, an existential dread about the where she is going. A definite and emphatic fave.
The most striking feature was the refusal of melodrama and steady restraint. I used to be a fan of Kafka, Conrad, Lawrence- somehow the poem reminded me of their restraints after nearly four decades. 🙏
September 19th, 2025 03:12
rebellion_in_sanity said:
One of most unpretentious howl in the vaccum- lament for the unfulfilled dreams, an existential dread about the where she is going. A definite and emphatic fave.
The most striking feature was the refusal of melodrama and steady restraint. I used to be a fan of Kafka, Conrad, Lawrence- somehow the poem reminded me of their restraints after nearly four decades. 🙏
September 19th, 2025 03:12
