Comments received on poems by white lily lament
Who am I?
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophical questions that have been asked by many for ages an existential quest written in these words. In the search for self one confronts many issues of values, guilt, responsibility, identity a profoundly deep write
July 23rd, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophical questions that have been asked by many for ages an existential quest written in these words. In the search for self one confronts many issues of values, guilt, responsibility, identity a profoundly deep write
July 23rd, 2026 04:24
We are one and the same
Paul Bell said:
At times in this poem I feel the person has reached the end of a troubled life.
Maybe at the beginning there was light, but through time it disappeared into darkness.
May 2nd, 2026 06:53
Paul Bell said:
At times in this poem I feel the person has reached the end of a troubled life.
Maybe at the beginning there was light, but through time it disappeared into darkness.
May 2nd, 2026 06:53
We are one and the same
sorenbarrett said:
There is an image here of destruction bringing about life in another a phoenix a self sacrifice a metamorphosis on another level, Well done
May 2nd, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is an image here of destruction bringing about life in another a phoenix a self sacrifice a metamorphosis on another level, Well done
May 2nd, 2026 04:46
Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the line (Perfect purity is emptiness.) This is a deep philosophical statement. A very nicely written piece
October 2nd, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the line (Perfect purity is emptiness.) This is a deep philosophical statement. A very nicely written piece
October 2nd, 2025 03:46
Nothing
Paul Bell said:
Yes, we all go through the motions now, politeness personified, the revolutionary in us all has been confiscated.
October 2nd, 2025 03:25
Paul Bell said:
Yes, we all go through the motions now, politeness personified, the revolutionary in us all has been confiscated.
October 2nd, 2025 03:25
