Comments received on poems by arquious
scars tale
RSM0812 said:
If u can face your own fear an beat it u have nothing to loose. We are only afraid of the unkown.
October 14th, 2025 05:19
RSM0812 said:
If u can face your own fear an beat it u have nothing to loose. We are only afraid of the unkown.
October 14th, 2025 05:19
scars tale
sorenbarrett said:
In a literal sense this poem paints a picture but metaphorically a far different one. Our travels in life are marked in our memory. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
In a literal sense this poem paints a picture but metaphorically a far different one. Our travels in life are marked in our memory. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 04:00
letters to be sent
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice the bridge half built seems like the other half must be built by the other individual. A wonderful read
September 25th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice the bridge half built seems like the other half must be built by the other individual. A wonderful read
September 25th, 2025 18:17
before the quill falls silent
Neville said:
this feels so very real .. indeed, almost imminent .. anyone that writes will undoubtedly relate .. Anyway, kindest regards to both you and your pen sir .. Neville
September 24th, 2025 05:39
Neville said:
this feels so very real .. indeed, almost imminent .. anyone that writes will undoubtedly relate .. Anyway, kindest regards to both you and your pen sir .. Neville
September 24th, 2025 05:39
before the quill falls silent
Doggerel Dave said:
Everything felt more real then.... not, despite being so ephemeral today it has (by virtue of its volume) the feel of an explosion rather than a construction built on solid foundations.... Insight right there.
September 23rd, 2025 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Everything felt more real then.... not, despite being so ephemeral today it has (by virtue of its volume) the feel of an explosion rather than a construction built on solid foundations.... Insight right there.
September 23rd, 2025 05:58
before the quill falls silent
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem speaking what many a poet feels that poetry meant more in print than on the net. I too have felt that but then there would be far less chance of being published or even read. Once immortality was cut in stone now it has moved to the pages of a book. Well written
September 23rd, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem speaking what many a poet feels that poetry meant more in print than on the net. I too have felt that but then there would be far less chance of being published or even read. Once immortality was cut in stone now it has moved to the pages of a book. Well written
September 23rd, 2025 03:58
Just Before the Light Turns Green
Dan Williams said:
I used to be so impatient having to sit at a light or being stuck in traffic. Now I use the time to notice things I hadn\'t on previous trips, sometimes many many previous trips. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:13
Dan Williams said:
I used to be so impatient having to sit at a light or being stuck in traffic. Now I use the time to notice things I hadn\'t on previous trips, sometimes many many previous trips. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:13
Just Before the Light Turns Green
Paul Bell said:
Me running for my train as the world watches on.
September 22nd, 2025 11:49
Paul Bell said:
Me running for my train as the world watches on.
September 22nd, 2025 11:49
Just Before the Light Turns Green
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, enjoyed
September 22nd, 2025 11:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, enjoyed
September 22nd, 2025 11:27
Just Before the Light Turns Green
sorenbarrett said:
A great descriptive poem with wonderful imagery nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great descriptive poem with wonderful imagery nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 04:51
The River That Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS a fave for your first write and I do not give them easily. Your language is most poetic and I hope that you continue to write many more equally as beautiful.
September 21st, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS a fave for your first write and I do not give them easily. Your language is most poetic and I hope that you continue to write many more equally as beautiful.
September 21st, 2025 03:45
