Comments received on poems by RaysThroughDarkness
The Mask
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of contentment showing that one is happy the way that they are mask or not. And so it should be, we are who we choose to be. Here I would introject a bookend to yours. Please excuse the introjection.
Below one\'s mask lies a mirror
But in the dark and too near
Does not allow one to clearly see
The image of one\'s identity
Loved your poem
September 27th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of contentment showing that one is happy the way that they are mask or not. And so it should be, we are who we choose to be. Here I would introject a bookend to yours. Please excuse the introjection.
Below one\'s mask lies a mirror
But in the dark and too near
Does not allow one to clearly see
The image of one\'s identity
Loved your poem
September 27th, 2025 04:31