Comments received on poems by jjudaharts



life is spiritual
sorenbarrett said:

A fave for the philosophical thought and so cleanly worded

December 31st, 2025 08:46

life is spiritual
Katie B. said:

Lovely!

December 31st, 2025 08:43

a breath away
sorenbarrett said:

Literally true for when breath stops so does life. The history of language indicates that the verb (to be) originates from the word to breath. Well written

December 30th, 2025 11:36

hopefully
sorenbarrett said:

Earned indeed that that requires time and the patience of both. A lovely write

December 29th, 2025 08:11

perspective and reality.
sorenbarrett said:

Short but so full of wisdom it is a fact.

December 27th, 2025 16:48

mastering life
NafisaSB said:

well expressed -but yet we have to keep trying..

December 25th, 2025 02:02

just live
sorenbarrett said:

So short it reflects Carpe Diem and well said. Happy Holidays

December 24th, 2025 15:39

anxiety through my eyes
sorenbarrett said:

Anxiety is a racing motor in a still car. Very nicely said

December 22nd, 2025 04:07

mastering life
Soman Ragavan said:

Indeed, life cannot be mastered by any living being, in any species. Life is a loan that has a “return-by” date, like books in libraries. We will have to give it up whether we want it or not. It will be taken away from us at any moment. The biggest sorrow is that we don’t know when that date will be... However, poets look at eternity, as a way of defeating the shortness or finality of life. When we write, we are in fact saying : “I may be gone any minute, but my compositions will remain. The Internet is the vehicle that spreads my writings all over the world...”

December 21st, 2025 01:31

mastering life
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

I’m a sucker for short poetry.. great work

December 20th, 2025 22:19

mastering life
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the task. Each time I catch a little but it soon escapes and I am left with nothing. Furthermore as soon as I catch it, it ceases to blow and is no longer wind. So it is with life. A lovely write

December 20th, 2025 16:41

Bathing in Silence
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

At least tell me the water is warm/hot

December 18th, 2025 23:20

Bathing in Silence
sorenbarrett said:

And the question is what is behind that door. A most interesting write

December 18th, 2025 19:39

coming in from the cold
sorenbarrett said:

We all began small as a twinkle in our parents eye. A fun read

December 17th, 2025 16:25

silent meditation
sorenbarrett said:

Well stated. Liked it

December 16th, 2025 14:10

The World Waits
sorenbarrett said:

And indeed it does for those that still read and feel the zest of the written word. Well written

December 15th, 2025 03:42

swimming in blue
sorenbarrett said:

A proclamation of nature\'s beauty and a realization of its grandeur well said

December 13th, 2025 16:29

i have pondered
sorenbarrett said:

Whispers are often heard louder than shouts. A lovely write

December 12th, 2025 14:17

I Heard From An Artist
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

Gotta learn how to swim

December 11th, 2025 13:45

I Heard From An Artist
sorenbarrett said:

Short and powerful a fave

December 11th, 2025 12:46

a shower thought
Katie B. said:

Lovely!

December 10th, 2025 14:34

a shower thought
sorenbarrett said:

It’s amazing and very catchy. I loved it a lot although it was quite short and maybe that’s what made it so good.

December 10th, 2025 13:34

life is a performance
sorenbarrett said:

I don\'t like highly populated areas but I love this poem it makes so much sense and I can hear it. Lovey

December 9th, 2025 15:19

Motives
sorenbarrett said:

So short yet so meaningful and with layers too. A fave

December 8th, 2025 04:40

just a random thought
sorenbarrett said:

Love the twist in the last line. To be funny it has to have a bit of truth

December 5th, 2025 12:38

power of the single step
Katie B. said:

Prophetic! Nice write!

December 4th, 2025 04:55

power of the single step
sorenbarrett said:

A powerful and most poetic way to say one step at a time a fave

December 4th, 2025 04:31

A Simple Mystery I Read
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

Throws roses

December 3rd, 2025 02:28

A Simple Mystery I Read
sorenbarrett said:

A great saying that has deep meaning. Well done

December 2nd, 2025 12:07

Painting With My Fist
sorenbarrett said:

Hitting the wall is a phrase made literal in this poem. Nicely said

November 30th, 2025 14:21

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