Comments received on poems by Starfire



PRETTIEST POETRY.
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem with great running rhyme holding it together. A fun read that made sense and challenged the person to redefine what their desires are. Nicely done

November 11th, 2025 15:24

No one noticed.
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting format of broken lines like broken earth, broken person, broken relationship. Just what I see.

November 6th, 2025 17:11

Memories.
sorenbarrett said:

People and memories fade as expressed in this write. Nicely done

November 3rd, 2025 18:00

Touch the shadows.
NinjaGirl said:

This is such a work of art! One of my favorite poems I have ever read. The shape, the conversations, the questions, everything. I love that there is so much love and so much pain in it. Beautifully said!

November 2nd, 2025 21:44

Touch the shadows.
sorenbarrett said:

Questioning of oneself in this poem where regret remains locked. Regret a terrible cancer that needs to be surgically removed before it spreads. A lovely write

November 2nd, 2025 13:16

Touch the shadows.
RSM0812 said:

This is a really well written poem. It describes a specific lonliness the all experience at some point in life. Nice ✍️

November 2nd, 2025 13:13

I\'m fucking angry.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of self degradation but at the same time resolve and grit to carry on. Well written

November 1st, 2025 12:14