Comments received on poems by PerditaRose
Shutdown
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to walk in the fresh air, clear the lungs.
In saying that, it\'s blowing a storm out yonder. Maybe just stay in and reflect.
November 26th, 2025 09:48
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to walk in the fresh air, clear the lungs.
In saying that, it\'s blowing a storm out yonder. Maybe just stay in and reflect.
November 26th, 2025 09:48
Shutdown
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and it always turns around. Stick with it would miss your rhyme
November 26th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and it always turns around. Stick with it would miss your rhyme
November 26th, 2025 08:20
shadow puppets
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid picture cast in this haiku of darkness. Lovely
November 25th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid picture cast in this haiku of darkness. Lovely
November 25th, 2025 04:25
3:00am, more or less
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem. It speak to the poet inside us that keeps us company. A lovely write
November 23rd, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem. It speak to the poet inside us that keeps us company. A lovely write
November 23rd, 2025 04:49
Bumpy Ride
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about getting one\'s feet on solid ground before taking any risks. A lovely poem of trepidation and patience. The time will come to open up and take risks. A wonderful write
November 21st, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about getting one\'s feet on solid ground before taking any risks. A lovely poem of trepidation and patience. The time will come to open up and take risks. A wonderful write
November 21st, 2025 06:50
Bumpy Ride
Paul Bell said:
The minefield of love.
One must wear gloves.
Hope the other is in agree.
And if not.
Let it be.
November 21st, 2025 06:03
Paul Bell said:
The minefield of love.
One must wear gloves.
Hope the other is in agree.
And if not.
Let it be.
November 21st, 2025 06:03
Snow Scenes
sorenbarrett said:
So many classic images of winter and all hooked together in rhyme. A lovely poem of oncoming cold. Although this seems clearly to be a literal poem it could be taken as metaphoric abut a cooling relationship as well. Loved it
November 20th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many classic images of winter and all hooked together in rhyme. A lovely poem of oncoming cold. Although this seems clearly to be a literal poem it could be taken as metaphoric abut a cooling relationship as well. Loved it
November 20th, 2025 11:13
Snow Scenes
2781 said:
It\'s a serious poem. I feel for you.
If not, you hit the spot.
November 20th, 2025 10:37
2781 said:
It\'s a serious poem. I feel for you.
If not, you hit the spot.
November 20th, 2025 10:37
Thoughts of Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely done poem of winter\'s approach and the changing of the season. Nicely penned
November 18th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely done poem of winter\'s approach and the changing of the season. Nicely penned
November 18th, 2025 20:46
Idioms
Doggerel Dave said:
I am well past responding to \"Baby, won\'t you come home?\" verses................ However the self proclaimed silliness tickled my......
November 17th, 2025 01:24
Doggerel Dave said:
I am well past responding to \"Baby, won\'t you come home?\" verses................ However the self proclaimed silliness tickled my......
November 17th, 2025 01:24
Idioms
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and needing another. It is moving and nicely written
November 16th, 2025 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and needing another. It is moving and nicely written
November 16th, 2025 14:51
Shooting Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting write it makes me think of the Aurora borealis. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting write it makes me think of the Aurora borealis. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 10:54
Isolation
sorenbarrett said:
A most poignant poem about the decent of relationships in society and the present lack of trust. Sad and to where it will go no one can say. Well penned
November 14th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most poignant poem about the decent of relationships in society and the present lack of trust. Sad and to where it will go no one can say. Well penned
November 14th, 2025 10:07
Creation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of metaphor that sends a deeper message about communication and its difficulty in painting a thought or emotion. Nicely done.
November 12th, 2025 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of metaphor that sends a deeper message about communication and its difficulty in painting a thought or emotion. Nicely done.
November 12th, 2025 14:48
My Apology
sorenbarrett said:
Miscommunication, misunderstanding, the key to many arguments, fights and wars, breeding mistrust, anger and tragedy. Well written
November 11th, 2025 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Miscommunication, misunderstanding, the key to many arguments, fights and wars, breeding mistrust, anger and tragedy. Well written
November 11th, 2025 07:32
The Glass Deer
sorenbarrett said:
An image dear of a deer kept near and now out of fear put behind glass clear. A touching write.
November 10th, 2025 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
An image dear of a deer kept near and now out of fear put behind glass clear. A touching write.
November 10th, 2025 21:15
November
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid and clearly put haiku. Nicely written
November 9th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid and clearly put haiku. Nicely written
November 9th, 2025 16:25
Asleep
sorenbarrett said:
A race in one\'s sleep. Nicely portrayed and with a timely reveal
November 8th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A race in one\'s sleep. Nicely portrayed and with a timely reveal
November 8th, 2025 14:07
Night
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! This is raw, unsettling, and beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing such a powerful piece. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:09
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! This is raw, unsettling, and beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing such a powerful piece. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:09
Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
Night
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
