Comments received on poems by PerditaRose
Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark topic, the rhyme scheme that feels like a heart beat and the tercets make it feel as though it is skipping a beat yet caught up in the next tercet. All merge in whole message that is haunting. Welcome to MPS with a fave
November 6th, 2025 15:37
Night
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Perdita. And welcome to the Poetic side.
November 6th, 2025 14:47
