Comments received on poems by Dhiman Shah
The Womb We Wounded
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem showing regard for our planet and nature in general. The native American saying \"Shall I take a knife and tear my mother\'s bosom? Then when I die she will not take me to her bosom to rest\"
December 19th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem showing regard for our planet and nature in general. The native American saying \"Shall I take a knife and tear my mother\'s bosom? Then when I die she will not take me to her bosom to rest\"
December 19th, 2025 07:02
The Weight of Being the Son
sorenbarrett said:
A brilliant poem that not only is good in rhyme and meter but tells its message in great images. Masterfully crafted it stands strong with a powerful message. Very nicely done and a fave
December 18th, 2025 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
A brilliant poem that not only is good in rhyme and meter but tells its message in great images. Masterfully crafted it stands strong with a powerful message. Very nicely done and a fave
December 18th, 2025 09:47
A Lament for the Forgotten Dawn
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, enjoyed immensely
December 14th, 2025 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, enjoyed immensely
December 14th, 2025 04:16
A Lament for the Forgotten Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I can identify with and magnificently written in wonderful rhyme and good meter it calls out to a deaf world to hear the music of nature and to a blind world to see the beauty around them. Alas none pay any attention and we live in a concrete, glass, steel and plastic world of out own creation that we worship. A sad work but so true. A fave
December 14th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I can identify with and magnificently written in wonderful rhyme and good meter it calls out to a deaf world to hear the music of nature and to a blind world to see the beauty around them. Alas none pay any attention and we live in a concrete, glass, steel and plastic world of out own creation that we worship. A sad work but so true. A fave
December 14th, 2025 03:57
The Unspoken Within
Katie B. said:
Raw, thick, powerful images and word use. Wonderful theme and topic. We should never be silenced. Great write. Thanks for sharing!
December 9th, 2025 06:43
Katie B. said:
Raw, thick, powerful images and word use. Wonderful theme and topic. We should never be silenced. Great write. Thanks for sharing!
December 9th, 2025 06:43
The Unspoken Within
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that can be taken for a people, a race, an individual. It stands as a cry to the oppressor that a new ruler is born. Well done a fave
December 9th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that can be taken for a people, a race, an individual. It stands as a cry to the oppressor that a new ruler is born. Well done a fave
December 9th, 2025 06:36
The Labyrinth of Thyself
2781 said:
And every knee shal bow; and every tongue confess...
December 8th, 2025 09:01
2781 said:
And every knee shal bow; and every tongue confess...
December 8th, 2025 09:01
The Labyrinth of Thyself
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging and rallying poem of the strength of the soul. Well written in good rhyme and meter it speaks to all. A fave
December 8th, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging and rallying poem of the strength of the soul. Well written in good rhyme and meter it speaks to all. A fave
December 8th, 2025 08:10
The Awakening Beyond the Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical and metaphorical as well this poem deals with the burden and pain of knowledge. Well worded and foundation laid it unravels its logic. Well done
December 6th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical and metaphorical as well this poem deals with the burden and pain of knowledge. Well worded and foundation laid it unravels its logic. Well done
December 6th, 2025 04:04
