Comments received on poems by Jah
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic indeed if not in the sense of passion in the sense of emotion. Lovely
December 30th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic indeed if not in the sense of passion in the sense of emotion. Lovely
December 30th, 2025 14:05
Muse
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shares both love and sadness with feelings of loss and theft. An inspiration turned thief. Well written
December 28th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shares both love and sadness with feelings of loss and theft. An inspiration turned thief. Well written
December 28th, 2025 07:00
In the end
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that make this poem a fave for me. It is the sharing of time with someone that gives meaning to a life. A lovely write
December 27th, 2025 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that make this poem a fave for me. It is the sharing of time with someone that gives meaning to a life. A lovely write
December 27th, 2025 08:39
In the end
Friendship said:
Your poem might be written to share the universal experiences of love and loss, to evoke empathy, and to foster a sense of connection among readers who have faced similar situations. It serves as a reminder of the complexity of human emotions and the stories we carry with us.
December 27th, 2025 07:56
Friendship said:
Your poem might be written to share the universal experiences of love and loss, to evoke empathy, and to foster a sense of connection among readers who have faced similar situations. It serves as a reminder of the complexity of human emotions and the stories we carry with us.
December 27th, 2025 07:56
Pieces of the galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
If we can but leave a piece of peace and a little of ourself in everyone we meet then our life has been worth while. A lovely write
December 26th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
If we can but leave a piece of peace and a little of ourself in everyone we meet then our life has been worth while. A lovely write
December 26th, 2025 07:20
Why did you do it you ask?
Katie B. said:
Love \"counting the same stars\" well written. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 24th, 2025 06:40
Katie B. said:
Love \"counting the same stars\" well written. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 24th, 2025 06:40
Why did you do it you ask?
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and tender this poem is at the same time melancholic and holds love as a haunting memory with the hope of finding it again in the future. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and tender this poem is at the same time melancholic and holds love as a haunting memory with the hope of finding it again in the future. Well written. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:05
She ain’t me
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is a monster that grows stronger with time. A write that is melancholic and yet we can not turn back the clock and must move forward not backward. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is a monster that grows stronger with time. A write that is melancholic and yet we can not turn back the clock and must move forward not backward. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 04:11
Hypnosis
sorenbarrett said:
Some call it toxic an obsession. All relationships are a mix of good and bad but when the balance turns more bad than good we call it toxic. To some the experience is worth it and who else has the right to judge. A poem of mixed experiences that the person themselves realizes, if so who has the right to say what they should do. loved it
December 20th, 2025 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Some call it toxic an obsession. All relationships are a mix of good and bad but when the balance turns more bad than good we call it toxic. To some the experience is worth it and who else has the right to judge. A poem of mixed experiences that the person themselves realizes, if so who has the right to say what they should do. loved it
December 20th, 2025 16:39
Heart set ♥️
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of infatuation and attraction to a chance finding. Well written
December 17th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of infatuation and attraction to a chance finding. Well written
December 17th, 2025 03:59
Lazy love
sorenbarrett said:
There is something special in this write, something common, something pensive, yet thoughtless, there is raw polish to it. It speaks of the common man with his flaws and his virtues. It is tangible but vapid. A lovely write and a fave
December 16th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is something special in this write, something common, something pensive, yet thoughtless, there is raw polish to it. It speaks of the common man with his flaws and his virtues. It is tangible but vapid. A lovely write and a fave
December 16th, 2025 05:54
scream your silence in to mine
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s funny that silence is so loud...it has so much more of a message, so much more of a sting.
December 15th, 2025 22:51
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s funny that silence is so loud...it has so much more of a message, so much more of a sting.
December 15th, 2025 22:51
scream your silence in to mine
sorenbarrett said:
Silence speaks louder that thunder. It is the silence between notes that makes the music have feeling, it is the silence between words that give meaning to the conversation. Well written
December 15th, 2025 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Silence speaks louder that thunder. It is the silence between notes that makes the music have feeling, it is the silence between words that give meaning to the conversation. Well written
December 15th, 2025 15:32
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
So romantic and eternal at the same time. A lovely poem of devotion and full of love. Very nice
December 14th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
So romantic and eternal at the same time. A lovely poem of devotion and full of love. Very nice
December 14th, 2025 10:43
Memories
2781 said:
Interesting concept, but do we really know who we really are?
You see, I am wondering who I am.
My wife thinks I am nuts.
December 14th, 2025 10:33
2781 said:
Interesting concept, but do we really know who we really are?
You see, I am wondering who I am.
My wife thinks I am nuts.
December 14th, 2025 10:33
Does cupid know?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation in confrontation with love lost. This poem presents love as a possession rather than a gift and to loose it is to loose all one has. As a gift it is freely given with no expectation in return. A different presentation of what love is. Very well written
December 12th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation in confrontation with love lost. This poem presents love as a possession rather than a gift and to loose it is to loose all one has. As a gift it is freely given with no expectation in return. A different presentation of what love is. Very well written
December 12th, 2025 04:32
My universe, him.
sorenbarrett said:
Smitten is the word that comes to mind with this poem. Obsessed and enamored ring throughout this poem of passion. Well written
December 11th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Smitten is the word that comes to mind with this poem. Obsessed and enamored ring throughout this poem of passion. Well written
December 11th, 2025 08:14
