Comments received on poems by Lyric Rune



Breathe
sorenbarrett said:

We all hate to be told what to do and our own resistance impedes its usefulness. A lovely write of control and who is to take it.

December 29th, 2025 06:08

Green, Blue. and You
sorenbarrett said:

It is through the eyes of another that we see ourselves. How susceptible we are to the mirror of another\'s eyes if we love or trust them. A lovely poem

December 28th, 2025 04:23

The Day I Knew
Katie B. said:

Lovely, symbolic gesture of love. Pleasant read. Well done.

December 27th, 2025 04:09

The Day I Knew
sorenbarrett said:

A secret kept in poetic verse of a love hidden out of fear of loss. It appears as a prayer of hope. Well done with good flow.

December 27th, 2025 03:52

Closer, Not Less
Katie B. said:

Just a lovely, pleasant, beautiful read about love. Great share

-Katie

December 26th, 2025 03:56

Closer, Not Less
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that speaks of the better that one knows someone the more they are loved. Nicely written it has a wistful feel to it.

December 26th, 2025 03:49

Lessons Learned From Sunflowers
Mutley Ravishes said:

Sunflowers reaching up for the sun. Lets not forget all the good things that happen too on this Earth!
Happy Holidays!

December 25th, 2025 05:58

Lessons Learned From Sunflowers
sorenbarrett said:

A community gives strength and others give power. Nicely written. A happy holidays to you

December 25th, 2025 04:22

Shards of Light
sorenbarrett said:

This seems almost a toast to enemies a warning. Nicely written it reads well. Happy holidays to you

December 24th, 2025 03:54

Inherited Silence
2781 said:

What\'s that saying - to err is human, to forgive is divine.

God speed...

December 23rd, 2025 07:07

Inherited Silence
sorenbarrett said:

How many times we carry the name of our family and guilt by association is a terrible thing. We are only responsible for what we do and are not that of others. Well done

December 23rd, 2025 03:51

A Warning To The Readers
Katie B. said:

Love it! Said with much truth! Well written. Great read!!

December 22nd, 2025 08:44

A Warning To The Readers
sorenbarrett said:

I love the associations made in this poem and how they are applied to a poet. Nicely done

December 22nd, 2025 04:21

A Warning To The Readers
Lorenz said:

Preserve me from the sin of poetry !

December 22nd, 2025 04:02

The Almost Lover
sorenbarrett said:

Love wishes the loved well even if it is not what the lover wishes for but the door is always left open for return and change of mind. Very nicely written.

December 21st, 2025 04:41

Echoes In My Phone; A Timeline of Texts Never Sent
sorenbarrett said:

This poem runs the gambit of relationship issues and ends with the continued recognition of love. A wonderful poem

December 20th, 2025 03:48

Shards
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS A most interesting poem with metaphor telling a story of a broken heart mended and becoming whole. Nicely written

December 20th, 2025 03:36

Shards
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏

December 19th, 2025 23:29