Comments received on poems by rubberduck
The morning after I took my life
sorenbarrett said:
There is a strong message of not feeling noticed, acknowledged, respected or wanted in this poem. It calls out in its extremity for recognition and love that are only shown after a person is gone. It is raw and open with its neediness. So sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
There is a strong message of not feeling noticed, acknowledged, respected or wanted in this poem. It calls out in its extremity for recognition and love that are only shown after a person is gone. It is raw and open with its neediness. So sad but well written
January 11th, 2026 04:14
The morning after I took my life
Soman Ragavan said:
The most merciless thing about life is that it goes on even when you yourself are gone…
“Eventually they’ll smile again...” This shows that life goes on, regardless...
“Life continues on...” Life has the terrible habit of continuing.... for others...
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January 11th, 2026 03:11
Soman Ragavan said:
The most merciless thing about life is that it goes on even when you yourself are gone…
“Eventually they’ll smile again...” This shows that life goes on, regardless...
“Life continues on...” Life has the terrible habit of continuing.... for others...
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January 11th, 2026 03:11
