Comments received on poems by Pennyp
Ghosts
gray0328 said:
Your poem is a powerful meditation on grief, trauma, and the fragile line between existing and merely surviving. It reflects a speaker who feels trapped in looping memories — unable to move forward, yet unwilling to disappear. The recurring motifs of ghosts, weather, and the body create a portrait of someone living with persistent emotional pain while searching for self-acceptance and healing. Well Done Penny
January 20th, 2026 10:45
gray0328 said:
Your poem is a powerful meditation on grief, trauma, and the fragile line between existing and merely surviving. It reflects a speaker who feels trapped in looping memories — unable to move forward, yet unwilling to disappear. The recurring motifs of ghosts, weather, and the body create a portrait of someone living with persistent emotional pain while searching for self-acceptance and healing. Well Done Penny
January 20th, 2026 10:45
Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a great outlet of grief and joy. Ghosts haunt us all. Here it is heard as being incorporated into the present. Well done
January 12th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a great outlet of grief and joy. Ghosts haunt us all. Here it is heard as being incorporated into the present. Well done
January 12th, 2026 08:30
Ghosts
2781 said:
The truth will set us free.
I enjoy an honest write.
If we have the right Ghost, he turns our mourning into dancing.
January 12th, 2026 08:28
2781 said:
The truth will set us free.
I enjoy an honest write.
If we have the right Ghost, he turns our mourning into dancing.
January 12th, 2026 08:28
