Comments received on poems by Kluoxe
Under His Possession
sorenbarrett said:
A charming love poem of patience and hope. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 27th, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
A charming love poem of patience and hope. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow. Well done
January 27th, 2026 09:34
Your Someone else\'s Queen
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of loss here and with a concession. Well written
January 21st, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of loss here and with a concession. Well written
January 21st, 2026 14:41
Barbarian
sorenbarrett said:
It is self forgiveness that counts and not what others think. A sad poem but one should not give up on oneself.
January 20th, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is self forgiveness that counts and not what others think. A sad poem but one should not give up on oneself.
January 20th, 2026 08:08
I\'ll be your King
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a plea and a pledge in one. Nicely written it speaks of giving all in return for another. Nicely worded
January 19th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a plea and a pledge in one. Nicely written it speaks of giving all in return for another. Nicely worded
January 19th, 2026 09:03
Grandfather Clock
sorenbarrett said:
Time is the thing in this poem time that can not be retrieved time that is now written in memories. A wonderful write
January 18th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Time is the thing in this poem time that can not be retrieved time that is now written in memories. A wonderful write
January 18th, 2026 08:43
Greedy Miss
sorenbarrett said:
The sense of being used, taken advantage of comes through in this poem. A type of present day slavery or indentured servitude comes to mind. Well done
January 17th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
The sense of being used, taken advantage of comes through in this poem. A type of present day slavery or indentured servitude comes to mind. Well done
January 17th, 2026 04:11
Royalty
sorenbarrett said:
Here a contrast is provided with the things that money can provide and the desire for such. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Here a contrast is provided with the things that money can provide and the desire for such. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:59
The King in Chess
sorenbarrett said:
Designed by someone that understood power structure where the king does little but be a liability pawns disposable cannon fodder, bishops are powerful but expendable as are knights and castles but the queen wields the most power. A lovely write
January 15th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Designed by someone that understood power structure where the king does little but be a liability pawns disposable cannon fodder, bishops are powerful but expendable as are knights and castles but the queen wields the most power. A lovely write
January 15th, 2026 04:19
Oldest One
sorenbarrett said:
All following children fall in the shadow of the oldest unless by some chance they perform some superhuman task. A lovely poem of roles. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
All following children fall in the shadow of the oldest unless by some chance they perform some superhuman task. A lovely poem of roles. Nicely written
January 14th, 2026 04:56
Athena
Lorenz said:
Athena, ballerina, filipina .I love this eurythmic fantasy !
January 13th, 2026 10:57
Lorenz said:
Athena, ballerina, filipina .I love this eurythmic fantasy !
January 13th, 2026 10:57
Athena
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed she is or was. A great write that takes one through the fantasy of the mind in attraction to another. Well written
January 13th, 2026 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed she is or was. A great write that takes one through the fantasy of the mind in attraction to another. Well written
January 13th, 2026 10:05
