Comments received on poems by Heart on my Sleeve
I Am Leaving
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply metaphoric and tragic it calls out mutual destruction in the breaking of a relationship. Whenever two are joined the actions of either one affect the other. A joint suicide. Nicely and most poetically written
February 5th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply metaphoric and tragic it calls out mutual destruction in the breaking of a relationship. Whenever two are joined the actions of either one affect the other. A joint suicide. Nicely and most poetically written
February 5th, 2026 04:50
I Am Leaving
Friendship said:
Your work explores themes of guilt, sacrifice, and the emotional toll of leaving someone behind. It reflects on the complexity of relationships, particularly the burdens and responsibilities that come with deep connections.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
Friendship said:
Your work explores themes of guilt, sacrifice, and the emotional toll of leaving someone behind. It reflects on the complexity of relationships, particularly the burdens and responsibilities that come with deep connections.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
Indifference
sorenbarrett said:
This poem ends on a very strong word such a contrast from the opening. Indifference seems to have been shed revealing stronger underlying emotions. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem ends on a very strong word such a contrast from the opening. Indifference seems to have been shed revealing stronger underlying emotions. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 04:45
