Comments received on poems by roseeee



The Human Way
Doggerel Dave said:

I don\'t know where to begin; I became lost after the third stanza (or it may have been the second, I\'m not sure), understood you are 18 and attempting to find a place. But \'they\' may not be those you wish to integrate with.
Your hold on Socratic wisdom in your final line “All I know is that I know nothing.” demonstrates a need to escape from the norms and values that \'they\' impose.
Hold onto that and go.

February 28th, 2026 04:13

The Human Way
sorenbarrett said:

There is anger felt in this poem as well as a strong feeling of isolation and alienation. Nicely written

February 28th, 2026 03:53