Comments received on poems by girlunknown
Ocean of Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor and nicely written it pulls at the heart and makes one hold their breath.
May 11th, 2026 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor and nicely written it pulls at the heart and makes one hold their breath.
May 11th, 2026 10:12
Ocean of Sorrow
Paul Bell said:
Love, who would have it.
Lifts you up, then drowns you in sorrow.
Still, as the wise man says. When you\'re in the water, pick another fish.
May 11th, 2026 09:12
Paul Bell said:
Love, who would have it.
Lifts you up, then drowns you in sorrow.
Still, as the wise man says. When you\'re in the water, pick another fish.
May 11th, 2026 09:12
An Unwatered Thing
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this piece. An existential exploration. Well done
May 4th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this piece. An existential exploration. Well done
May 4th, 2026 03:44
The Mirage of Home
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels lost. Feelings of impermanence and a shiftless life where no one cares or dares to open their doors. It is dark until the last lines where there is a glimmer of hope. Nicely composed
April 2nd, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels lost. Feelings of impermanence and a shiftless life where no one cares or dares to open their doors. It is dark until the last lines where there is a glimmer of hope. Nicely composed
April 2nd, 2026 10:26
Edges That Don\'t Match
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling out of place and unneeded maybe unwanted as well. A sad write of being awkward and not belonging. We all feel this way sometimes and in some situations but to feel this way all the time is most threatening. Well written
March 31st, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling out of place and unneeded maybe unwanted as well. A sad write of being awkward and not belonging. We all feel this way sometimes and in some situations but to feel this way all the time is most threatening. Well written
March 31st, 2026 08:10
Edges That Don\'t Match
Thomas W Case said:
This is a powerful reflection on identity, survival, and the quiet heartbreak of feeling “unnatural” in a world that demands conformity.
March 31st, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
This is a powerful reflection on identity, survival, and the quiet heartbreak of feeling “unnatural” in a world that demands conformity.
March 31st, 2026 07:36
Washing the Wreckage
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with many implications that send their messages of withdrawal, inaction, lassitude, indecision, subservience. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with many implications that send their messages of withdrawal, inaction, lassitude, indecision, subservience. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 15:30
