Comments received on poems by Maru
Cheesecake
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to have a sense of sophistication in wording and metaphor. There is an implication of continuing message from one line to the next and the food metaphor may imply more. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to have a sense of sophistication in wording and metaphor. There is an implication of continuing message from one line to the next and the food metaphor may imply more. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 04:20
Cheesecake
lilmoonxx said:
It feels like the opening scene to a movie. I would definitely watch it if it existed❤️❤️
July 23rd, 2026 03:02
lilmoonxx said:
It feels like the opening scene to a movie. I would definitely watch it if it existed❤️❤️
July 23rd, 2026 03:02
