Comments received on poems by Ogunisjustice



Silent truths
Friendship said:

A powerful story. Your story addresses themes of betrayal, manipulation, and the toxic dynamics between a mother and daughter. It highlights the emotional turmoil caused by a motherโ€™s actions that undermine her daughterโ€™s dignity and autonomy, portraying a disturbing relationship marked by control and abuse.

June 22nd, 2026 10:08

Silent truths
ms.divine said:

I agree with sorenbarrett betrayal to its finest this is a really fucked up story that makes me sad so relatable ๐Ÿ‘ฉ๐Ÿฟโ€โš–๏ธ
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June 22nd, 2026 09:30

Silent truths
sorenbarrett said:

Sounds like confusion and betrayal no loyalty here.

June 22nd, 2026 09:25

Choppin block ๐Ÿ”ช
Friendship said:

Enjoy your humor

June 21st, 2026 18:01

Choppin block ๐Ÿ”ช
ms.divine said:

Raw ๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿคฃ

June 21st, 2026 13:50

Choppin block ๐Ÿ”ช
sorenbarrett said:

A dis on this. Well said and a dig. Well done

June 21st, 2026 13:49

Choppin block ๐Ÿ”ช
GoddessEYES said:

Exactly that\'s crazy this poem is third person veiw deception of another person that\'s genuinely innocent

June 21st, 2026 13:25

Them hay days โฒ๏ธ
sorenbarrett said:

Diversion is the best weapon against such attacks. Nicely written

June 21st, 2026 04:17

A Fucking Ritual
ms.divine said:

Diabolical beans ๐Ÿซจ

June 19th, 2026 10:14

A Fucking Ritual
sorenbarrett said:

Unfair treatment met with anger in this poem

June 19th, 2026 09:51

Ms.dinvine
sorenbarrett said:

A short message in this write.

June 18th, 2026 12:39

2grown4urtoxcity
sorenbarrett said:

Anger turns stubborn in this write.

June 18th, 2026 04:15

Feminine products ๐Ÿšบ
sorenbarrett said:

This is a poem of confrontation well done

June 16th, 2026 18:59

Feminine products ๐Ÿšบ
Friendship said:

well done

June 16th, 2026 16:16

Feminine products ๐Ÿšบ
ms.divine said:

Narcissistic behavior that\'s crazy

June 16th, 2026 16:11

Overpayment scams
sorenbarrett said:

Making mountains out of mole hills to take advantage of poor people scared by exaggerated threats. Well written

June 15th, 2026 12:19

2 feels in 1๐Ÿ†—
sorenbarrett said:

The psychological drive to level someone and bring them down to one\'s own level is shown in this write. Well expressed

June 14th, 2026 04:45

Bust it open a second time๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ†
sorenbarrett said:

Poetic sex. Graphic in allegory

June 13th, 2026 04:23

Bust it open part 1
sorenbarrett said:

Sensual, sexual you know you can buy coconut milk in the store.

June 12th, 2026 02:55

Dancing dirty baby ๐Ÿ’‹
sorenbarrett said:

Dancing has always been a socially acceptable form of public sex. The movement of two connected bodies in rhythm to the throbbing beat, touching of bodies. Nicely written.

June 11th, 2026 04:28

Phat pussy
sorenbarrett said:

This seems flat out sexual pulling no punches

June 10th, 2026 05:28

Harsh advice ๐Ÿคฎ
sorenbarrett said:

A write of turning the negative to positive a good message

June 10th, 2026 05:01

sitophilia
sorenbarrett said:

Sensual turned sexual in a poem of desire that can be taken in one short bite. Well done

June 9th, 2026 03:56

sitophilia
ms.divine said:

๐Ÿ˜‚ so erotic

June 9th, 2026 00:28

Reflect your bullshit ๐Ÿ”™
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like a poetic warning to stop playing around. Strongly stated

June 7th, 2026 04:20

\"La Zone Chic\"
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic flirt an attraction and infatuation. Nicely written

June 6th, 2026 03:34

Walk it like you talk it sis
sorenbarrett said:

One need not listen to what others ay, Well written

June 4th, 2026 21:42

We see yall
Friendship said:

Well said.

June 3rd, 2026 12:13

We see yall
sorenbarrett said:

A adversarial world is painted in this poem of putdowns and trouble causing. It sends a powerful message

June 3rd, 2026 11:10

Family room
sorenbarrett said:

A relationship evaluation in a poem. Well done

May 30th, 2026 12:39

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