Comments received on poems by RCx_Vortex
Chess
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of competition, thought, anxiety and a surprise ending well done
June 9th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of competition, thought, anxiety and a surprise ending well done
June 9th, 2026 03:41
Soldier’s lullaby
Eugene S. said:
\"Old man old man, on thine grave,
My philosophy on the wise, differs an octave.\" - i see that. Well written. Love the story flow, and fancy finding you here. First Birdbard, now you! Regardless, awesome write!!☠️
May 31st, 2026 05:33
Eugene S. said:
\"Old man old man, on thine grave,
My philosophy on the wise, differs an octave.\" - i see that. Well written. Love the story flow, and fancy finding you here. First Birdbard, now you! Regardless, awesome write!!☠️
May 31st, 2026 05:33
Chess
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a game of chess where one must look ahead anticipate and plan. Well written
May 21st, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a game of chess where one must look ahead anticipate and plan. Well written
May 21st, 2026 04:53
Battlefield
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in nature of wording it plays on symbolism and is well done
May 10th, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in nature of wording it plays on symbolism and is well done
May 10th, 2026 04:53
Soldier’s lullaby
Doggerel Dave said:
Yor irony extends right to the very last line: \"But we won the war, so it went to plan.\"
Disciplined piece of writing I admire.
May 6th, 2026 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yor irony extends right to the very last line: \"But we won the war, so it went to plan.\"
Disciplined piece of writing I admire.
May 6th, 2026 18:39
Soldier’s lullaby
sorenbarrett said:
The meter in this poem reminiscent of hush little baby don\'t say a word papa\'s gonna buy you a mockingbird. It takes on a darker tone about war and being lied to. Society molding children into soldiers. Well done
May 6th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
The meter in this poem reminiscent of hush little baby don\'t say a word papa\'s gonna buy you a mockingbird. It takes on a darker tone about war and being lied to. Society molding children into soldiers. Well done
May 6th, 2026 05:05
Vera, Lain and Nell
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a wonderful message all set to good rhyme with a good pattern. Loved it a fave
April 29th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a wonderful message all set to good rhyme with a good pattern. Loved it a fave
April 29th, 2026 05:16
3:17am
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS a surreal poem that builds line by line nicely done
April 27th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS a surreal poem that builds line by line nicely done
April 27th, 2026 04:44
3:17am
arqios said:
I’ve got two water bottles by my bedside, lol and still get up and pour myself a cup! Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️🛏️🙏🏻🕊️
April 27th, 2026 02:21
arqios said:
I’ve got two water bottles by my bedside, lol and still get up and pour myself a cup! Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️🛏️🙏🏻🕊️
April 27th, 2026 02:21
