Comments received on poems by HelpMePlease
Wings Attached and then Connected
sorenbarrett said:
This poem by its alternating repetition of line imitates the flapping of wings in a most ingenious manner. The metaphor also is a good one for repeated attempts to little avail. It is in the last lines that the wings become connected and satisfaction is produced. A fave
May 29th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem by its alternating repetition of line imitates the flapping of wings in a most ingenious manner. The metaphor also is a good one for repeated attempts to little avail. It is in the last lines that the wings become connected and satisfaction is produced. A fave
May 29th, 2026 04:29
