Comments received on poems by Birdies



Whale Fall
sorenbarrett said:



October 10th, 2026 04:08

Whale Fall
sorenbarrett said:

I have read of such and it sends shivers down the spine. I have seen the gentle giants swim off shore, watched them breach right off the beach. To think of one blown up bloated and exploded to fall like rain the sands to stain and pollute with such a smell. Nicely written

October 10th, 2026 04:08

The Room
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely metaphor with a strong meaning. Nicely done and a fave

October 1st, 2026 13:14

To Do
Friendship said:

nicely said

September 26th, 2026 19:15

To Do
sorenbarrett said:

A truism that work is never done and list of tasks is continual. Life on a treadmill. Well said poetically

September 26th, 2026 04:43

Shoes
Fränz Müller said:

So true! Great work.

August 20th, 2026 09:12

Shoes
Demar Desu said:

who raises the man that raises himself?

August 20th, 2026 08:33

Shoes
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and very meaningful. Yes I believe it is as all boys emulate a father figure. Well written my friend

August 20th, 2026 05:36

Bluebell
Fränz Müller said:

Great work.

August 17th, 2026 21:08

Bluebell
sorenbarrett said:

A great poem where a flower takes on human characteristics predicting future. Well done.

August 17th, 2026 16:07

The highway castle
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS, Birdies 🙏🕊️

July 26th, 2026 20:22

The highway castle
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the story set in rhyme and near rhyme it is earthy and too close to humanity to be taken seriously. Well done

July 26th, 2026 11:05