Comments received on poems by Vanilla Mochi



Mom Would Be Sad
sorenbarrett said:

Mom and others as well would be sad. One\'s behaviors have effects on others. Statistically children of suicides are more likely to commit suicide themselves and to a lesser degree others that are acquainted with suicides are affected as well. A poem of restraint and that is good.

August 27th, 2026 04:13

Let Me Be Weak With You
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful plea for companionship. Nicely written

August 26th, 2026 04:01

I Won a War No One Could See
Paul Bell said:

Yes, the internal war sure is the hardest to win, and probably outlasts most wars.
Sometimes in your head you make it a neutral war, usually works for both parties.

August 22nd, 2026 04:14

I Won a War No One Could See
sorenbarrett said:

A great message put to rhyme. Nicely done.

August 22nd, 2026 03:45