Comments received on poems by Vanilla Mochi
Mom Would Be Sad
sorenbarrett said:
Mom and others as well would be sad. One\'s behaviors have effects on others. Statistically children of suicides are more likely to commit suicide themselves and to a lesser degree others that are acquainted with suicides are affected as well. A poem of restraint and that is good.
August 27th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Mom and others as well would be sad. One\'s behaviors have effects on others. Statistically children of suicides are more likely to commit suicide themselves and to a lesser degree others that are acquainted with suicides are affected as well. A poem of restraint and that is good.
August 27th, 2026 04:13
Let Me Be Weak With You
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful plea for companionship. Nicely written
August 26th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful plea for companionship. Nicely written
August 26th, 2026 04:01
I Won a War No One Could See
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the internal war sure is the hardest to win, and probably outlasts most wars.
Sometimes in your head you make it a neutral war, usually works for both parties.
August 22nd, 2026 04:14
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the internal war sure is the hardest to win, and probably outlasts most wars.
Sometimes in your head you make it a neutral war, usually works for both parties.
August 22nd, 2026 04:14
I Won a War No One Could See
sorenbarrett said:
A great message put to rhyme. Nicely done.
August 22nd, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great message put to rhyme. Nicely done.
August 22nd, 2026 03:45
