Comments received on poems by oãoj enitnatsnoc
Smoke Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes things unnoticed have been around all along. Well done
September 15th, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes things unnoticed have been around all along. Well done
September 15th, 2026 19:04
The Room Knows My Name
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves one thinking. Well done
September 10th, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves one thinking. Well done
September 10th, 2026 14:41
Stray Dogs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of similarity and dissimilarity a personification where dogs become some humans and of literal meaning. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of similarity and dissimilarity a personification where dogs become some humans and of literal meaning. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 08:45
THE FLAT BLEEDS WITH ME
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of helplessness in this write and resignation to a sense of doom. Well done
September 7th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of helplessness in this write and resignation to a sense of doom. Well done
September 7th, 2026 04:01
THE RAIN RUSTS ME
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely weaving of rhyme from the end to internal in sporadic unexpected places that carried this like elevation down a mountain side. Nicely worked
September 5th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely weaving of rhyme from the end to internal in sporadic unexpected places that carried this like elevation down a mountain side. Nicely worked
September 5th, 2026 12:27
THE WEATHER INSIDE ME
sorenbarrett said:
There are metaphors here and introspection a feeling of depression that turns to forgiveness. Well done
September 4th, 2026 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
There are metaphors here and introspection a feeling of depression that turns to forgiveness. Well done
September 4th, 2026 15:50
THE WEATHER INSIDE ME
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around personal introspection, the nature of choices, and the inevitability of time\'s passage. Forgiveness and letting go.
September 4th, 2026 15:26
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around personal introspection, the nature of choices, and the inevitability of time\'s passage. Forgiveness and letting go.
September 4th, 2026 15:26
LIFE
Doggerel Dave said:
Read easily, understood perfectly. Sixty years on (me) I\'d advise to stop ruminating about death now. When the time comes close you can instead ruminate on what you did and how you got out there and attempted to change your small part of the world. Go now.
Good strong write I liked very much, however.
September 3rd, 2026 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Read easily, understood perfectly. Sixty years on (me) I\'d advise to stop ruminating about death now. When the time comes close you can instead ruminate on what you did and how you got out there and attempted to change your small part of the world. Go now.
Good strong write I liked very much, however.
September 3rd, 2026 17:58
LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting point of view nicely composed it presents life as a loosing proposition. Well done
September 3rd, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting point of view nicely composed it presents life as a loosing proposition. Well done
September 3rd, 2026 13:05
Below the Surface
sorenbarrett said:
This is well imaged and good metaphor. It is haunting and there are parts that one can identify with. A sad poem of parting with what one was. Well done and a fave.
September 2nd, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This is well imaged and good metaphor. It is haunting and there are parts that one can identify with. A sad poem of parting with what one was. Well done and a fave.
September 2nd, 2026 04:16
