Comments received on poems by clarity by me
The night beach
Dog days said:
This is a good poem but I think I missed the main idea
September 8th, 2026 20:32
Dog days said:
This is a good poem but I think I missed the main idea
September 8th, 2026 20:32
Clocks do not define
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this write wends its way from beginning to end. Nicely done
September 5th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this write wends its way from beginning to end. Nicely done
September 5th, 2026 12:29
The two (The Dream)
sorenbarrett said:
Memories, fantasies, who knows what is real. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
Memories, fantasies, who knows what is real. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 19:40
No peace, yet love
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this piece calls out as differentiation of he and she male and female the duality of yin and yang. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2026 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this piece calls out as differentiation of he and she male and female the duality of yin and yang. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2026 13:02
Confused weather
Fränz Müller said:
It’s hard to stay steady when the sand constantly shifts beneath one’s feet. Great work.
September 3rd, 2026 09:52
Fränz Müller said:
It’s hard to stay steady when the sand constantly shifts beneath one’s feet. Great work.
September 3rd, 2026 09:52
Confused weather
sorenbarrett said:
Unpredictable is the word. Nicely imaged
September 2nd, 2026 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
Unpredictable is the word. Nicely imaged
September 2nd, 2026 20:52
