Comments received on poems by hannahcahill
Lioness
lysistrata said:
Hannah,
My only complaint that for a "Lioness",I would have preferred bigger characters.
Except you are as wicked as only a woman could be?!
I like very much the metaphor,the combination of taste,vision,emotion and the climax...
Very Good Start!
June 12th, 2016 04:31
lysistrata said:
Hannah,
My only complaint that for a "Lioness",I would have preferred bigger characters.
Except you are as wicked as only a woman could be?!
I like very much the metaphor,the combination of taste,vision,emotion and the climax...
Very Good Start!
June 12th, 2016 04:31
Lioness
isituorme said:
Really good I don't know who ami to comment ,the use of less is more ,I feel I went through the hunt ,it's goo powerful
June 11th, 2016 20:22
isituorme said:
Really good I don't know who ami to comment ,the use of less is more ,I feel I went through the hunt ,it's goo powerful
June 11th, 2016 20:22
