Comments received on poems by teenageheartbreak
Freestyle #1
The 2 A.M Writer said:
It\'s really good dude, seems to be about a past lover and wanting that love back, even if it was \"pain\" in the end. Good write!
November 3rd, 2016 20:31
The 2 A.M Writer said:
It\'s really good dude, seems to be about a past lover and wanting that love back, even if it was \"pain\" in the end. Good write!
November 3rd, 2016 20:31
Why you left I\'ll never know
Christina8 said:
I love the rhymes and rhythm of this poem. Very well done!
October 30th, 2016 18:46
Christina8 said:
I love the rhymes and rhythm of this poem. Very well done!
October 30th, 2016 18:46
\"Shady\" (Heartbreak Series)
teenageheartbreak said:
Comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading. -TAHB
October 22nd, 2016 23:07
teenageheartbreak said:
Comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading. -TAHB
October 22nd, 2016 23:07
Short Poem #3
teenageheartbreak said:
Not my best but I will make up for it. Thanks for reading! TAHB
October 1st, 2016 02:06
teenageheartbreak said:
Not my best but I will make up for it. Thanks for reading! TAHB
October 1st, 2016 02:06
Short Poem #2
ShadedSorrow said:
Very good, i like how you express the pain.
September 27th, 2016 07:36
ShadedSorrow said:
Very good, i like how you express the pain.
September 27th, 2016 07:36
Short Poem #2
teenageheartbreak said:
I can't post much with my schedule. I'll try to post more often. Hopefully you all enjoy this. Thanks for reading! TAHB
September 26th, 2016 22:48
teenageheartbreak said:
I can't post much with my schedule. I'll try to post more often. Hopefully you all enjoy this. Thanks for reading! TAHB
September 26th, 2016 22:48
Underage Feelings
teenageheartbreak said:
I don't know what to do with her. She's a few years younger than me and things are moving quickly. I don't know if we're dating. I don't know if she claims me. Should I consider talking to her? Do I wait? This doesn't seem huge but it's messing me up and I need answers. Thank you for reading. TAHB
September 7th, 2016 22:04
teenageheartbreak said:
I don't know what to do with her. She's a few years younger than me and things are moving quickly. I don't know if we're dating. I don't know if she claims me. Should I consider talking to her? Do I wait? This doesn't seem huge but it's messing me up and I need answers. Thank you for reading. TAHB
September 7th, 2016 22:04
Short Poem #1
teenageheartbreak said:
Found this in my notes. I decided to make a series of short poems. Not back to back but every now and then. Thank you for reading! TAHB
August 22nd, 2016 22:27
teenageheartbreak said:
Found this in my notes. I decided to make a series of short poems. Not back to back but every now and then. Thank you for reading! TAHB
August 22nd, 2016 22:27
My nightmare sparked a lovely dream
Tony36 said:
Great write, would make a wonderful song
August 21st, 2016 06:47
Tony36 said:
Great write, would make a wonderful song
August 21st, 2016 06:47
My nightmare sparked a lovely dream
teenageheartbreak said:
Thank you all for the nice comments. You've all been very supportive. It's pushing me further to chasing my dreams. Hope you enjoyed this. Once again thank you all and as always thanks for reading. TAHB
August 21st, 2016 00:54
teenageheartbreak said:
Thank you all for the nice comments. You've all been very supportive. It's pushing me further to chasing my dreams. Hope you enjoyed this. Once again thank you all and as always thanks for reading. TAHB
August 21st, 2016 00:54
What was it?
teenageheartbreak said:
Tell me what you think :) thanks for your support! TAHB
August 19th, 2016 23:22
teenageheartbreak said:
Tell me what you think :) thanks for your support! TAHB
August 19th, 2016 23:22
Take it Slow (remix) (unfinished)
teenageheartbreak said:
Unlike my other unfinished poem... This one will be finished. Please tell me what you think. As always thanks for reading!❤️
August 18th, 2016 22:27
teenageheartbreak said:
Unlike my other unfinished poem... This one will be finished. Please tell me what you think. As always thanks for reading!❤️
August 18th, 2016 22:27
Why you left I\'ll never know
teenageheartbreak said:
I also have rap lyrics that I could post but I don't know if I would because they don't really have the style or flow that my poems on this profile have. Also feel free to give me something to try to make something out of. I like challenges. TAHB
August 17th, 2016 15:19
teenageheartbreak said:
I also have rap lyrics that I could post but I don't know if I would because they don't really have the style or flow that my poems on this profile have. Also feel free to give me something to try to make something out of. I like challenges. TAHB
August 17th, 2016 15:19
Why you left I\'ll never know
teenageheartbreak said:
I'm not really feeling this one. In thinking about making poems where I use 4 popular lines from a song and input them into my own. I don't want to seem like I'm copying anybody or taking credit for something that's not mine. It wouldn't be a lot or most of it. I don't know. Tell me what you all think about this idea and this poem. As always thank you for reading. TAHB
August 17th, 2016 15:14
teenageheartbreak said:
I'm not really feeling this one. In thinking about making poems where I use 4 popular lines from a song and input them into my own. I don't want to seem like I'm copying anybody or taking credit for something that's not mine. It wouldn't be a lot or most of it. I don't know. Tell me what you all think about this idea and this poem. As always thank you for reading. TAHB
August 17th, 2016 15:14
Untitled Pt.2
teenageheartbreak said:
I called it part two because it goes off the same flow of my poem "Untitled" and also uses similar words at the start. This was made in 3 minutes so its not the best piece of work. Hope you all enjoy this though. Thank you for reading! TAHB
August 16th, 2016 02:46
teenageheartbreak said:
I called it part two because it goes off the same flow of my poem "Untitled" and also uses similar words at the start. This was made in 3 minutes so its not the best piece of work. Hope you all enjoy this though. Thank you for reading! TAHB
August 16th, 2016 02:46
I\'m sorry I\'m too much
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love this one THB ~ because in my experience "The Art of Loving one's Lover" is all about "Opening Up" and sharing each others mental and physical intimacy. The rate of "opening up" is crucial and I have made the mistake of "opening up" either to quick or too slow or not al all. I am sure your Lover understands and will come back to you so you can open up together like the petals of two beautiful roses unfolding and coming together in love's perfection. Thanks for sharing ~ thinking of You and your Lover blissfully together ~ Yours BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 10:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love this one THB ~ because in my experience "The Art of Loving one's Lover" is all about "Opening Up" and sharing each others mental and physical intimacy. The rate of "opening up" is crucial and I have made the mistake of "opening up" either to quick or too slow or not al all. I am sure your Lover understands and will come back to you so you can open up together like the petals of two beautiful roses unfolding and coming together in love's perfection. Thanks for sharing ~ thinking of You and your Lover blissfully together ~ Yours BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 10:55
I\'m sorry I\'m too much
lysistrata said:
"But it was way to much"
Correct the typo &
When are adding 🎼🎶?
I hope one Day you would write for the RED HOT CHILI 😨 or 👅
August 15th, 2016 03:58
lysistrata said:
"But it was way to much"
Correct the typo &
When are adding 🎼🎶?
I hope one Day you would write for the RED HOT CHILI 😨 or 👅
August 15th, 2016 03:58
I\'m sorry I\'m too much
teenageheartbreak said:
Finding my flow again. Tell me what you think. As always thanks for reading! TAHB
August 15th, 2016 03:16
teenageheartbreak said:
Finding my flow again. Tell me what you think. As always thanks for reading! TAHB
August 15th, 2016 03:16
My Love at First Sight
teenageheartbreak said:
Just something on the spot. I'll try to have my other poem finished. I've been overloaded lately. Let me know what you think and if you'd like to see if I can keep this on going. Thanks for reading! TAHB
August 12th, 2016 21:25
teenageheartbreak said:
Just something on the spot. I'll try to have my other poem finished. I've been overloaded lately. Let me know what you think and if you'd like to see if I can keep this on going. Thanks for reading! TAHB
August 12th, 2016 21:25
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