Going Home
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS This poem gives the feel of one soon ready to pass. In this light it is sad but as it goes on there is a doubt as to whether this is imminent of just a future look. It holds strong feelings of family bonds that extend beyond this life to the next and a strong religious view. Nicely written with rhyme it flows well and holds a most positive outlook. Nicely done

October 20th, 2026 07:03