Comments received on poems by LUNAFAUS

Dear Father,
onepauly said:

this baffles me. I have no comment.

April 20th, 2018 12:29

Dear Father,
Nicholas Browning said:

Children are like that. They adapt to what they are shown. Best regards to sorting it out friend.

April 20th, 2018 03:51

Dear Father,
orchidee said:

Hope you can find healing and a way through this.

April 20th, 2018 01:36

Her Advice
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Yay mommas are usually right and I could relate to many lines of this super cool poem. ESP liked how u rhymed stressed with pressed meaningfully. Yeah we were so carefree at 12 and this poem makes us long for those playful days . Kudos.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

October 23rd, 2016 07:55

Dandylion said:

wow...really loved this!

July 25th, 2016 22:45

AAA said:

beautifully said

July 25th, 2016 22:03

rrodriguez said:


July 21st, 2016 00:14

Tropicana said:

amazing!!! as long you don't do anything too drastic

July 20th, 2016 14:21

Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

July 20th, 2016 12:55

Kurt Philip Behm said:

Beautifully succinct. My favorite lines...

"I grow an addiction to what seems like fiction,
a mindless infection,
I remain calm so she won't suspect it"

July 20th, 2016 12:52

Rosethebrokenhearted said:

Short and beautiful, thank you for the read

July 20th, 2016 11:59

IAmJaz said:

This is beautiful

July 20th, 2016 08:59