Comments received on poems by LUNAFAUS
Dear Father,
Nicholas Browning said:
Children are like that. They adapt to what they are shown. Best regards to sorting it out friend.
April 20th, 2018 03:51
Nicholas Browning said:
Children are like that. They adapt to what they are shown. Best regards to sorting it out friend.
April 20th, 2018 03:51
Her Advice
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yay mommas are usually right and I could relate to many lines of this super cool poem. ESP liked how u rhymed stressed with pressed meaningfully. Yeah we were so carefree at 12 and this poem makes us long for those playful days . Kudos.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 07:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yay mommas are usually right and I could relate to many lines of this super cool poem. ESP liked how u rhymed stressed with pressed meaningfully. Yeah we were so carefree at 12 and this poem makes us long for those playful days . Kudos.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 07:55
Obsession
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautifully succinct. My favorite lines...
"I grow an addiction to what seems like fiction,
a mindless infection,
I remain calm so she won't suspect it"
July 20th, 2016 12:52
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Beautifully succinct. My favorite lines...
"I grow an addiction to what seems like fiction,
a mindless infection,
I remain calm so she won't suspect it"
July 20th, 2016 12:52
Obsession
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Short and beautiful, thank you for the read
July 20th, 2016 11:59
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Short and beautiful, thank you for the read
July 20th, 2016 11:59