Comments received on poems by Randi

Augustus said:

Chameleon. Been one my whole life. It is totally dishonest to yourself and to others. It is destructive. Thanks for sharing.

September 23rd, 2016 11:12

Bookbag said:

(I'm just going to add something I got from this, because I enjoyed it)

Your masks to hide you from your shame
We are all just a pawn in their game
Quick to leave a stain
Quick to bring pain
And what's left that remains
All the ruins and torn down caves
Be true to yourself
But forced to wear a mask
Society puts a label on those who they know will not last
Time is running out and we're going down fast
Lord put blood on my doors to make this storm past
Free at last
I'm just freeing my ambitions
I take time to look at what I'm missing
There it goes it's me
Lost in the world who cannot see
If I go just leave it me
Masks cut your eyes differently just to see
Believe me

September 23rd, 2016 11:10

ShadedSorrow said:

I sympathize, we all have masks. Keep writing, this was pretty good

September 23rd, 2016 09:19