Comments received on poems by tepo



Leap year
FineB said:

Hello Tepo,

An excellent write.

Yes, leap year is upon us!

Keep writing FineB

January 17th, 2020 17:32

Leap year
Barry Hodges said:

I found the ending a big let down and (in line 3) you need an apostrophe before cause to indicate you are omitting the prefix \"be\" - thus: \'cause. Or even \'\'cos.

January 16th, 2020 12:49

Leap year
Nemo said:

With love that strong you both will unite 🌹♥️
Wonderful write tempo 🌹

January 15th, 2020 15:55

Leap year
LittleGift said:

Simply put this was a gorgeous read my friend, just beautiful writing

January 15th, 2020 12:49

More
Maxine Smith said:

Wow Stevie!
So passionate and sensual.
It left me wanting to read ‘more’

January 15th, 2020 10:52

Leap year
Christina8 said:

This is an absolutely wonderful love poem Stevie!! Gets a favorite from me to be sure!!

January 15th, 2020 07:40

Leap year
Maxine Smith said:

Oh wow Stevie!!
I actually don’t have words good enough to compliment this stunning poem.
This is probably one of my favourites of all favourites.
At night, the two most certainly share one dream.
Of beautiful love.
Amazing.


January 15th, 2020 05:46

Leap year
Fay Slimm said:

Oh - loud applause for this superbly romantic rhyming - -I endorse your final line tepo and may love stay as beautiful after that first date.

January 15th, 2020 04:37

Leap year
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, I am sure that love will be fulfilled and their souls will become one.

Andy

January 15th, 2020 02:27

Leap year
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... What an ending, like different ends of the rainbow!

Thank you

January 15th, 2020 02:21

Betrayed
Maxine Smith said:

Emotional to read, beautifully written as always.

January 7th, 2020 14:27

Betrayed
FineB said:

Hello Tepo,

An interesting and awesome write.

Very good.

Keep writing FineB

January 7th, 2020 08:43

Betrayed
Nemo said:

Beautiful 🌹

January 6th, 2020 21:49

Eclipse
Christina8 said:

I hope you continue to keep writing!! This is an awesome piece!

January 6th, 2020 15:52

See
Christina8 said:

Love this Stevie, excellent piece of poetry!

January 6th, 2020 15:49

Without
Christina8 said:

This is a phenomenal piece of work from a phenomenal poet!

January 6th, 2020 15:46

Eclipse
Memoirsofamadlife said:

Very sweet. Enjoyed it.

January 5th, 2020 18:00

Eclipse
Goldfinch60 said:

May that road be full of wonder, beauty and love tepo.

January 5th, 2020 02:30

Eclipse
FineB said:

Hello Tepo,

Magnificent, magical and mystical!

A great write.

Keep writing
FineB

January 5th, 2020 00:10

Eclipse
Maxine Smith said:

I’ve fallen into your poetic paradise with you.

Amazing work Stevie.



January 4th, 2020 17:15

Eclipse
Michael Edwards said:

Easy to be led into and easy to fall out of. Enjoyed the read tepo.

January 4th, 2020 10:41

Eclipse
dusk arising said:

Just be careful in paradise. The roads leading into paradise are smooth and luxurious. The roads out can be unforgettably rocky and the target for storms.

January 4th, 2020 10:27

Eclipse
Nemo said:

Keep blessing us with your work 💯

January 4th, 2020 09:36

Have you ever part 2
Nicholas Browning said:

A lot of meaning in such a simple style. The way you\'ve written this gets me in the right place.

January 3rd, 2020 17:01

Have you ever part 2
Nemo said:

Wow an incredible write tepo 👍

January 3rd, 2020 14:30

Have you ever part 2
Maxine Smith said:

Wow!!
‘Hoarded triggers’
‘Deliberately blocked out the sun’
I could recite almost every line and relate so personally to each one.
This reached every hidden emotion, what an incredible poem Stevie.


January 3rd, 2020 13:35

Have you ever part 2
myself and me said:

The despair, the pain, the sadness through you into the dungeon, the dream keep you alive and lead you through the darkness. Nicely penned.

January 3rd, 2020 12:38

See
FineB said:

Hello Tepo,

A very good write.

Keep writing FineB

January 3rd, 2020 05:53

See
Nicholas Browning said:

This is quite nice.

January 3rd, 2020 03:07

See
Fay Slimm said:

A well expressed ballad of love\'s tender confessions to a very special lady - My only hope is that it\'s eager emotions are mostly reciprocated dear tepo. More please like this romantic read.

January 2nd, 2020 14:33

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