Comments received on poems by John-C-Hunter



Living Shadow
Augustus said:

1. As we walk through life we have certain expectations that in the end seem more like delusional thinking than our original optimism. 2. I really messed up back then and I never seem to be able to recover. ~~~These are some of the ideas that come to my mind as I read this carefully and nicely constructed poem. Every line is very powerful and i am having trouble choosing a favorite line. Welcome to MPS.

January 4th, 2017 09:18

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Augustus said:

I believe you are referring that existencial dilemma we often face when we try to figure out why we are here juxtaposed to why the hell are we when we all die anyway. This is well written and enjoyable.

January 3rd, 2017 10:33

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Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 3rd, 2017 09:53

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John-C-Hunter said:

Thanks for all the positive comments, they are sincerely appreciated.

January 2nd, 2017 14:43

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Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! Fabulous first poem. Full of imagery. A pleasure to read.

January 2nd, 2017 12:40

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willyweed said:

This is good dude welcome to the noodle factory! peace ww

January 2nd, 2017 11:39

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Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 2nd, 2017 09:45

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HappyMarii said:

Great first poem!! The images Iget from your poem are really good, I look forward to the next! Also welcome to the community!!

January 2nd, 2017 05:25