Comments received on poems by Oliver Cobbin
Dance the Night Away (Little Sweetshop on the Edge of Town)
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 14th, 2017 15:24
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 14th, 2017 15:24
The Jazz Band in Gas Masks
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with DS about the imagery, it is fantastic, in the sense of strange, surreal, and bizarre It is lengthy but worth the read. The core rhythm moves along over a few bumps. The main theme of bad music and musicians, and their acceptance by the audience is to me a reflection of most of today\'s artists. So, mostly a very good write and I enjoyed it enough to re-read it more than once. There nooks and crannies where one can find hidden images. Well done - Phil A.
January 30th, 2017 20:21
MendedFences27 said:
I have to agree with DS about the imagery, it is fantastic, in the sense of strange, surreal, and bizarre It is lengthy but worth the read. The core rhythm moves along over a few bumps. The main theme of bad music and musicians, and their acceptance by the audience is to me a reflection of most of today\'s artists. So, mostly a very good write and I enjoyed it enough to re-read it more than once. There nooks and crannies where one can find hidden images. Well done - Phil A.
January 30th, 2017 20:21
