Comments received on poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)
A quite dove needs the blue sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Sing away Violet and bring happiness to us all.
Andy
August 31st, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Sing away Violet and bring happiness to us all.
Andy
August 31st, 2023 01:16
A quite dove needs the blue sky
Bella Shepard said:
She is a Mourning Dove, and her voice so beautiful that whenever I hear it I smile. Thank you for your voice, for you make me smile with this lovely poem.
August 30th, 2023 13:51
Bella Shepard said:
She is a Mourning Dove, and her voice so beautiful that whenever I hear it I smile. Thank you for your voice, for you make me smile with this lovely poem.
August 30th, 2023 13:51
A quite dove needs the blue sky
Neville said:
this is truly lovely and very muchly enjoyed ..
August 30th, 2023 13:14
Neville said:
this is truly lovely and very muchly enjoyed ..
August 30th, 2023 13:14
A quite dove needs the blue sky
peto said:
Hope it is smiling now
As it is definitely singing with these words
Great to see a write from you
August 30th, 2023 11:22
peto said:
Hope it is smiling now
As it is definitely singing with these words
Great to see a write from you
August 30th, 2023 11:22
A quite dove needs the blue sky
LIZ said:
Ahhhh I missed your poems! Rebirth? 🌼 🌸 🌻
August 30th, 2023 11:15
LIZ said:
Ahhhh I missed your poems! Rebirth? 🌼 🌸 🌻
August 30th, 2023 11:15
Little leaf
L. B. Mek said:
\'accepted by the steady surface below lighthearted tender spaces\'
what a beautiful read, dear Poet
your words bridge a pattern of poetic symmetry
elevating your imagery, thank you!
August 25th, 2023 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'accepted by the steady surface below lighthearted tender spaces\'
what a beautiful read, dear Poet
your words bridge a pattern of poetic symmetry
elevating your imagery, thank you!
August 25th, 2023 02:45
Little leaf
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and a sense of sensitivity toward those things often neglected and unnoticed. A caring thought and write.
August 17th, 2023 23:28
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and a sense of sensitivity toward those things often neglected and unnoticed. A caring thought and write.
August 17th, 2023 23:28
Little leaf
Neville said:
makes me wanna beleaf in something far bigger than just me ... 🍃🍀🌿
August 17th, 2023 02:27
Neville said:
makes me wanna beleaf in something far bigger than just me ... 🍃🍀🌿
August 17th, 2023 02:27
Little leaf
Teddy.15 said:
I love this 😍 right from the beginning I was shouting out but what a contrast of colour the green would win every time against the grey . Beautiful ending dear Rose 🌹
August 10th, 2023 13:13
Teddy.15 said:
I love this 😍 right from the beginning I was shouting out but what a contrast of colour the green would win every time against the grey . Beautiful ending dear Rose 🌹
August 10th, 2023 13:13
Little leaf
Sunsetmet said:
Yes the little things are important how far a leaf can take us
August 10th, 2023 12:13
Sunsetmet said:
Yes the little things are important how far a leaf can take us
August 10th, 2023 12:13
Little leaf
Parisab said:
This delicate poem, looks like an ornate miniature painting! ‘Small leaves are important too’ I love the choice of the word ‘important’ here…
August 10th, 2023 11:32
Parisab said:
This delicate poem, looks like an ornate miniature painting! ‘Small leaves are important too’ I love the choice of the word ‘important’ here…
August 10th, 2023 11:32
Little leaf
orchidee said:
I know - me house is full of leaves in the autumn nights. I bring them indoors. They look chilly. lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:49
orchidee said:
I know - me house is full of leaves in the autumn nights. I bring them indoors. They look chilly. lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:49
Little leaf
peto said:
I got a feeling of being out of control
At the winds mercy
Yet also happy to be accepted among the greys
Really enjoyed the laughter line
August 10th, 2023 08:45
peto said:
I got a feeling of being out of control
At the winds mercy
Yet also happy to be accepted among the greys
Really enjoyed the laughter line
August 10th, 2023 08:45
Blue
Firefall said:
Isn\'t interesting how the blues can just arrive out of seemingly nowhere. Your lovely poem captured those feelings.
August 9th, 2023 19:25
Firefall said:
Isn\'t interesting how the blues can just arrive out of seemingly nowhere. Your lovely poem captured those feelings.
August 9th, 2023 19:25
Pigeon , softness in the world
Neville said:
I am very much a bird kinda guy and pigeons are no exception .. I love them all .... 🕊️
August 5th, 2023 01:05
Neville said:
I am very much a bird kinda guy and pigeons are no exception .. I love them all .... 🕊️
August 5th, 2023 01:05
Pigeon , softness in the world
Sunsetmet said:
I love this also reminds me of the city so many pigeons around me I love birds beautiful colorful artistry style poem
August 4th, 2023 14:26
Sunsetmet said:
I love this also reminds me of the city so many pigeons around me I love birds beautiful colorful artistry style poem
August 4th, 2023 14:26
Pigeon , softness in the world
Pop64 said:
She remains vigilant in her determination to just be, singing, flying free. Wonderfully descriptive and visual!
August 4th, 2023 10:06
Pop64 said:
She remains vigilant in her determination to just be, singing, flying free. Wonderfully descriptive and visual!
August 4th, 2023 10:06
Pigeon , softness in the world
L. B. Mek said:
Pigeon\'s have a grace to them
I can never truly explain
\'pigeon speaks of comfortable kindness
gentleness and warmth \'
this reads so true for me
a lovely tribute
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
Pigeon\'s have a grace to them
I can never truly explain
\'pigeon speaks of comfortable kindness
gentleness and warmth \'
this reads so true for me
a lovely tribute
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:27
Pigeon , softness in the world
Teddy.15 said:
I wanted to see what it was like from a birds eye view and so I did a parachute jump in Marlow, these birds are incredibly lucky to see what we cannot. I love your imagery dear Rose. 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:34
Teddy.15 said:
I wanted to see what it was like from a birds eye view and so I did a parachute jump in Marlow, these birds are incredibly lucky to see what we cannot. I love your imagery dear Rose. 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:34
Pigeon , softness in the world
orchidee said:
Good write V.
Yes, I took pigeons indoors on chilly nights. Loads of \'em flapping about in the house now! lol.
August 4th, 2023 05:00
orchidee said:
Good write V.
Yes, I took pigeons indoors on chilly nights. Loads of \'em flapping about in the house now! lol.
August 4th, 2023 05:00
Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe it\'s not a pot o\' gold at the end of the rainbow, but a place where all the butterflies live. Beautiful images here, \"her singing of soft petals,\" \"present by the singing sands made of lovely, settled lines.\" I love the ocean. You\'ve used it brilliantly here to perpetuate your \"butterfly\" images.
August 3rd, 2023 13:51
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe it\'s not a pot o\' gold at the end of the rainbow, but a place where all the butterflies live. Beautiful images here, \"her singing of soft petals,\" \"present by the singing sands made of lovely, settled lines.\" I love the ocean. You\'ve used it brilliantly here to perpetuate your \"butterfly\" images.
August 3rd, 2023 13:51
Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
Teddy.15 said:
A shift in mood dear Rose, I felt very seren reading this. I love the imagery of the butterfly dancing on the ripples 💖
August 1st, 2023 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
A shift in mood dear Rose, I felt very seren reading this. I love the imagery of the butterfly dancing on the ripples 💖
August 1st, 2023 03:33
Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
Bella Shepard said:
Pretty in pink, your butterfly flits so gracefully from line to line, through all those lovely places. Beautiful write!
July 31st, 2023 16:04
Bella Shepard said:
Pretty in pink, your butterfly flits so gracefully from line to line, through all those lovely places. Beautiful write!
July 31st, 2023 16:04
Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
LIZ said:
Nice! You\'re right, all parts of us have the need to feel safe, calm, and looked after. Butterflies symbolize change, transformation....rebirth...hope! I personally like black butterflies. They\'re rare. But then again, I\'m a little goth so no surprise there!! Lovely read! 🩷
July 31st, 2023 13:49
LIZ said:
Nice! You\'re right, all parts of us have the need to feel safe, calm, and looked after. Butterflies symbolize change, transformation....rebirth...hope! I personally like black butterflies. They\'re rare. But then again, I\'m a little goth so no surprise there!! Lovely read! 🩷
July 31st, 2023 13:49
Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
Neville said:
I really wish I had penned the following words ..
\"a part of a rainbow moves to the blues of another place
travelling to balance by golden smiling sands
she sits one part of a whole
in a new place\" ..
Neville ..................... 🦋🏳️🌈🦋
July 31st, 2023 12:58
Neville said:
I really wish I had penned the following words ..
\"a part of a rainbow moves to the blues of another place
travelling to balance by golden smiling sands
she sits one part of a whole
in a new place\" ..
Neville ..................... 🦋🏳️🌈🦋
July 31st, 2023 12:58
Blue
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
if blue and jazz music had words
they would read something like
your poem, I think..
thank you! dear Poet
a soothing read
July 31st, 2023 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
if blue and jazz music had words
they would read something like
your poem, I think..
thank you! dear Poet
a soothing read
July 31st, 2023 03:38
A buttercup sits on green grass
L. B. Mek said:
\'leaves live , leaves laugh
somewhere beneath her friendly feet lives the unseen , the unnoticed
and those greens that sensitively sit in cushions
maybe just maybe hold so much more
the world of lighthearted leaves leaves swaying in the breeze\'
\'little buttercup sits on grass
yet really , truly there is so much more than the grass
feeling is what counts sometimes\'
\'She feels the leaves are truly there
even if there simply in the distance
Singing on the tree
for others to see\'
just so beautiful, dear graceful Poet
(I read and learn)
July 31st, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'leaves live , leaves laugh
somewhere beneath her friendly feet lives the unseen , the unnoticed
and those greens that sensitively sit in cushions
maybe just maybe hold so much more
the world of lighthearted leaves leaves swaying in the breeze\'
\'little buttercup sits on grass
yet really , truly there is so much more than the grass
feeling is what counts sometimes\'
\'She feels the leaves are truly there
even if there simply in the distance
Singing on the tree
for others to see\'
just so beautiful, dear graceful Poet
(I read and learn)
July 31st, 2023 03:34
Blue
peto said:
I always associate blue with sadness
So was good to see the blues tied in to this
Keep em coming Violet
Turned blue to gold
July 31st, 2023 02:10
peto said:
I always associate blue with sadness
So was good to see the blues tied in to this
Keep em coming Violet
Turned blue to gold
July 31st, 2023 02:10
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