Comments received on poems by Bookworm



Everyone thinks
Clara said:

Oh I like this very much. The fluidity is great... And speaks to such a relatable topic these days. Definitely something more people experience than not.

CLARA X

September 3rd, 2019 13:27

Not a Love song
Nicholas Browning said:

Not a love song, eh?
A love poem!
Nice read.

March 24th, 2019 19:42

Not a Love song
LittleGift said:

Oh yes, when we just can’t keep our heart under lock and key. Love is a powerful thing. A lovely write

March 24th, 2019 11:15

Not a Love song
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful lovelorn write.

March 24th, 2019 01:46

There will be better days
Nicholas Browning said:

Searching for better days is all the was can do as we live.
Nice read, and thank you for sharing.

March 19th, 2019 14:48

There will be better days
Poetic Dan said:

Than you very much, loved it!

March 19th, 2019 11:35

There will be better days
tepo said:

Excellent
Could be a song in itself
Now I\'ve gotta get the songs the lines are from
Well done

March 19th, 2019 11:05

Do you already know?
Neville said:

Sounds like the L word to me... nicely poemed... Neville

January 27th, 2019 02:17

I created a reality
OUTBACK said:

YES* ( DREAMING* REALITY (S)* !

January 18th, 2019 05:40

I created a reality
OUTBACK said:

THE \" STORY \" of LIFE* ! THE STRUGGLE* ( DRAMA )* to ATTAIN* - WHAT IT IS - ONE SO DESIRES* & NOT* GETTING IT* ! THE STRUGGLE* to ATTAIN* WHAT IT IS - ONE SO DESIRES* & ( ATTAINING ) - IT* . . .

January 18th, 2019 05:39

How you make me feel
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Loved it Bookworm!

January 13th, 2019 18:49

Depression
Duenna Leya said:

I don’t know who the people are in your life who would leave you in the midst of your journey through depression but I just need to say this; I have seen and experienced depression through every rod of darkness it throws. I have had both people who left and people who stayed. The ones who love me the most, were a constant in spite of my darkness. They are the ones who brought back the light. Please consider that the distance from those who can’t be human enough to stay with you during the dark times, isn’t going to be a hinderance but leaves room for healing. They can be the weakness in your vision of the light. They stomp the cones if you get where I am going..... Also, enjoyed your poem, and will be reading future ones!

December 16th, 2018 10:47

Depression
yellowrose said:

a very good expression of somebody who is sinking under their own pain and depression .. being swamped under your own pain! well done x

March 11th, 2018 05:06

Depression
Finley Fire said:

Very deep poem, I love how you\'ve layed this out, it gives it more punch if you understand me. If this is a self reflection know that someday it gets brighter or so I\'m told, I have yet to see the light but I\'m hoping that it\'s true. Stay strong.

March 7th, 2018 21:19

I don’t fit in
Lorna said:

Be your own person or else you are living someone else\'s life.

March 7th, 2018 06:46

I don’t fit in
Diamond said:

Embrace yourself for all that you are and see how your experiences unfold, accept yourself with all that is going on with you coz no one else will do that for you. Much Love your way.

March 6th, 2018 23:05

I don’t fit in
Ivory said:

This is such a real piece. Love how honest it is. To truly be happy we must live our truth.

March 6th, 2018 21:55

Normal
Lorna said:

I\'m with you Bookworm! Trying to fit in usually makes for an unhappy life. Being different means one has to accept that you will be more \"alone\" unless you find like minded folks....

March 4th, 2018 06:16

I want to be like most girls
yellowrose said:

its hard to feel like we are different, jealous of other people .. a good piece of writing which i can relate to , ive always felt like im maybe different to other girls..

March 4th, 2018 03:09

Labels
forevergrateful said:

totally agree beautiful!

February 11th, 2018 18:54

I just keep smiling
forevergrateful said:

Love it thats truth!

February 11th, 2018 18:54

I just keep smiling
dusk arising said:

Nicely put. I too smile a lot.

February 11th, 2018 16:52

I just keep smiling
peeter pewter said:

:) Nice work, Bookworm. Good luck keeping the mask on! It works for me. You know about people with angry masks on? Those are not masks, its just them.

February 11th, 2018 14:00

Stereotyping
Clarita said:

Great job!! Very well written and extremely true we should never judge a book by its cover. If we do, we might just miss the wonders it holds within the pages.

January 2nd, 2018 00:02

Labels
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, alwasy be yourslef and let nobody tell you otherwise.

December 17th, 2017 03:02

Labels
Michael Edwards said:

Great poem - my father always said to me \'Be proud to be yourself and respect others\' And that has been with me all my life - and I am and I do. Hope that doesn\'t sound conceited but it has taken me through life.

December 17th, 2017 02:56

Pain
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write, love can be so painful at times.

December 11th, 2017 02:46

Pain
Masking said:

Oh how right you are, written for many of us who have actually felt that pain. Great Write. Thanks a lot for sharing.

December 10th, 2017 18:42

Pain
Bookworm said:

This is a poem that I wrote when I had feelings for someone that I couldn’t have and I just wrote down all the emotions I was feeling. I hope you guys like this one because I wrote it at like 3 am., but that’s when the best poems are written 😉 I’m open to comments- good and bad. Thank you.

December 10th, 2017 17:18

If I can\'t have you
Clarita said:

Your poem brings to life what my mind seems to overthink.

December 9th, 2017 14:54

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