Black Waves

Naeners

Black waves

 

In my ocean

 

Always cause

 

Such commotion

 

Black waves

 

Take my boat

 

And pull it down

 

Black waves

 

Don't feel pity

 

They don't care when

 

Things are shitty

 

Black waves

 

Fill my lungs

 

And let me drown

 

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2018 14:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
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  • HangingbyaHalo

    I like this. Simple but paints a picture. Good write.

  • chana

    Wow. Just a lot to take in to such peaceful death . Well written



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