It was the 1st of July
Our spirits were high
We practice singing
One final time
They called her down
I could not attend
My heart was racing
Until the end
Having to now wait
For anothers fate
Texting every single day
Hoping for a getaway
Sadly it was no
But she didn't care
The song she sang
Was soul satisfying
We spread it everywhere
You can't count on us
We're the air you breathe
When you feel like drowning
We'll be the air you need
With our heartfelt melody
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
Offline) - Published: August 3rd, 2018 02:08
- Comment from author about the poem: I was so chuffed when I asked Jorja (daughter) if she wanted to enter a singing competition that she was brave enough to do it and for the amazing song she picked.
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Well, if she actually sung it, she would have won it. There was only her and me in the competition! heehee. I won a cat show. Not for a cat, for me whining!
Hahaha, that was great.
Thank you
I feel so humble with this one.
wonderful!
As I by the comment
Always appreciated
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
Very grateful, thank you.
And for pointing out the echo, I shall strive to stay on this natural high!
Great write Dan. I felt the message. Well done!
Always appreciated. Glad so many of us feel the same vibe, always help inspiring writes.
Courage Mon Brave!
Its all but a stage
Dan,
A great George Eliot quote!
Just finished reading her novel, “Middlemarch in Spring”!
A fantastic literary work!
Did Jorja enjoy her birthday?
~Laura~
Thank you, I find it so hard to have time to read. Can't even keep up on here lol
She had a wonderful day, nice private pool in a house I'm(partner) are getting paid to stay (two big dogs) and lots of cake. Then the fun continues every day after 😉
Thanks for asking
Awesome!
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