Claudelle DeLuna

Femme Fatale

Clandestine woman

Father by an egotistic man


A tormented Mother,

She finds joy walking the corners of Town,

She is educated, formal, but always unhappy,

She is a roller coaster of her sexual desires,

Like a spider building a web, she traps all man she encounters,

She is the dominatrix,

Men are the delicacy of her untamed palate,

She savors the ruin of men,

She conquers them in an explosion of joy,

Clandestine woman running in all social circles





  • orchidee

    Should I meet her? (heehee. ooh.)

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      At your own risk........then put it in poetry!


    • Joe Dawson

      You have a very wise mind. Gainsaying such wisdom would be futile. Well done. Joe

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you for such a nice comment and your endorsement!
        Bless Day!

      • Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

        Reminds me of me and I have not even had the operation work..

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you for liking my work! Jason
          Bless Day!

        • Heartwriter

          Written so great. Loved the imagery your words brought!!

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            Thank you, grateful for your comment!
            Bless Day!

          • dusk arising

            And some people still need to have this explained to them?
            Love the Leon Brown quote, ... if only!

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              LOL! Thank you for stopping by! Dusk

            • JasmineUK

              A strong sexy woman,
              A beacon of allure,
              Harvesting all desires,
              For which there is no cure.

              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thanks for stopping by Jasmine!

                Love your wit.......... ;)

              • Suresh

                Even though I belong to a different clan, I am a man
                I have always believed that women should never succumb to this clan, I mean man.
                Well done

                • Claudelle DeLuna

                  Thank you for stopping by and commenting! Suresh

                • Neville

                  I have spent many years freeing people from the various boxes their society has put them in.... as long as no one is hurt along the way, I say enjoy, and I say it openly and I say it loud.... N

                  • Claudelle DeLuna

                    Thank you for visiting my old scribbles & commenting my friend!
                    Isn't sad when we work in the mental health field, all the things
                    we see and sometimes it really doesn't have anything to do with
                    an actual illness, more like just circumstantial, well let me stop here
                    cause I could go on and on, you and me could have similar philosophies,
                    based on our line of work.
                    Much appreciated, xoxo.....

                    • Neville

                      yes.. I'm sure you are right.. am away for a day or two so wont be here for a while...

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