Untravelled traveler

Poetic Dan



I am well travelled in where emotions can take me

My feet may not of touched as much as others roamed 

But I promise my heart has seen a few trips around

 

I'd like to take a moment in all of this

The times I've said God can't exist

To the moments I hit the ground asking to stop all this

To again in unexpected highs give thanks to its name

 

I've come to the point where I can see why I believe in no "God" I hear in this world of projection, but yet with this inner voice of myself gets greater attention.

 

In every word there is a lesson, I once believed all religion was a great deception but yet I still found myself crossing that line. 

Now I'll try and express what all thoses thoughts were, what I couldn't see in the message from all the higher vibration was actually my own deceiving actions I continued to do

 

I've slowly got to the point I'm being the most me I've always wanted to be and that in turn, is helping me except everything else in the same capacity 

 

This place others know of where there's no wrong or right 

Is a frequency that can only be felt in pure light

If you see something different then it's time to look inside 

Knowing you are not alone others are still there

To share our darkest of soul and the lightest too

Will cry or laugh or shout and scream then after that moment 

Will sit in peace knowing nothing has been contained 

 

With the next breath I've taken I am giving the spirit of life. 

One that I know for sure will never die and not because I was told so

But a feeling from the language of no tongues 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 6th, 2018 01:31
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  • orchidee

    An interesting write Dan. I can't sustain 'arguments' at this level. I mean 'argument' in a sort of technical sense of 'debate or discussion', not as a row!
    Sometimes I just 'know' what I believe - if you see what I mean?

    • Poetic Dan

      I feel your knowing serves you well and that's all we need to do, is know our knowing it true to us.

      Always appreciated
      Much love and respect

      • orchidee

        Thanks Dan. Some may call it 'blind faith'. I admit I don't question things all that much. Some if negative, would call it 'arrogance', and angrily say 'How do you just know?!'

        • Poetic Dan

          It's down to them to find out, if you live by word and I'm sure you do. The message you send out is pure doesn't matter where it comes from.

          • Brother_Kane

            Belief...

            Wether yes or no,
            Science may prove snow but it doesn’t let everything show... so to answer yes or no shows belief... just try not to act like a thief... and steal someone’s belief thats how people lose teeth or end up 6 feet below! At what point do you stop believing? It obviously wasn’t when god was leaving! When tablets bare the forbidden fruit and chemicals children are breathing I find at times like these it’s my eyes I believe in!

            Read your convo and it set me off writing this lol hope you guys like it ! Abit of my beliefs

            • Poetic Dan

              Absolutely brilliant, i love it when that happens. Always appreciate open thoughts, even more so with that flow of yours

              • Brother_Kane

                Cheers man got to love abit of inspiration:) also Dan I really like this poam of yours feel like I know where you’re coming from I’m from a town very little people actually realise there is a world outside of that very easy to find yourself stuck in a rut even tho you have learnt life’s lessons and gained knowledge along the way

              • dusk arising

                Whatever faith we have, so long as it does not demand anything from others, cannot be a bad thing surely?
                It is a personal thing within ones self. Leaves in question the motives of those who daily pontificate their chosen faith.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Nothing but the none judgement, blaming religion is like blaming plastic or guns for our problems.

                  Always appreciate your time
                  Much peace and respect

                • Heartwriter

                  Everyone has the right to come to terms of their own believes. Wonderful write Dan!

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Dam right and I now believe it all and that is in I believe nothing at all but the start and end is just pure love.



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