serenity-poetry

Human Nature

You are the sun, the moon,

The stars, the sea.

You rise, you fall,

You shine, you enthral

Like a true force of nature.

You change like the seasons 

But your only human,

You have your reasons. 

Comments2

  • Brother_Kane

    Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing

    • serenity-poetry

      Thanks, that's actually a really good point:)

      • Brother_Kane

        No problem look forward to reading more of your poems :)

      • Crystal Hope

        Really awesome write!



      To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.