You are the sun, the moon,
The stars, the sea.
You rise, you fall,
You shine, you enthral
Like a true force of nature.
You change like the seasons
But your only human,
You have your reasons.
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serenity-poetry (Pseudonym) (
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Very CooL!
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Love how you incorporated the ALL in the human existence, and at the same time the reasons why perhaps we can't truly be perfect at all times.
Blessings!
Thank you Claudelle, that means a lot. You definitely understood what I was trying to say:)
Blessings to you also!
Thank you Claudelle, that means a lot. You definitely understood what I was trying to say:)
Blessings to you also!
Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing
Thanks, that's actually a really good point:)
No problem look forward to reading more of your poems
Really awesome write!
Thanks so much crystal!
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