You are the sun, the moon,
The stars, the sea.
You rise, you fall,
You shine, you enthral
Like a true force of nature.
You change like the seasons
But your only human,
You have your reasons.
- Author: serenity-poetry (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 7th, 2018 09:13
- Category: Love
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: Adam Shirley
Comments2
Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing
Thanks, that's actually a really good point:)
No problem look forward to reading more of your poems 🙂
Really awesome write!
Thanks so much crystal!
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