serenity-poetry

Human Nature

You are the sun, the moon,

The stars, the sea.

You rise, you fall,

You shine, you enthral

Like a true force of nature.

You change like the seasons 

But your only human,

You have your reasons. 

Comments3

  • Claudelle DeLuna

    Very CooL!
    P.S.
    Love how you incorporated the ALL in the human existence, and at the same time the reasons why perhaps we can't truly be perfect at all times.

    Blessings!
    ;)

    • serenity-poetry

      Thank you Claudelle, that means a lot. You definitely understood what I was trying to say:)
      Blessings to you also!

      • serenity-poetry

        Thank you Claudelle, that means a lot. You definitely understood what I was trying to say:)
        Blessings to you also!

      • Brother_Kane

        Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing

        • serenity-poetry

          Thanks, that's actually a really good point:)

          • Brother_Kane

            No problem look forward to reading more of your poems :)

          • Crystal Hope

            Really awesome write!



          To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.