Human Nature

serenity-poetry

You are the sun, the moon,

The stars, the sea.

You rise, you fall,

You shine, you enthral

Like a true force of nature.

You change like the seasons 

But your only human,

You have your reasons. 

  • Author: serenity-poetry (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 7th, 2018 09:13
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 27
  • User favorite of this poem: Adam Shirley.

Comments2

  • Brother_Kane

    Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing

    • serenity-poetry

      Thanks, that's actually a really good point:)

      • Brother_Kane

        No problem look forward to reading more of your poems 🙂

      • Crystal Hope

        Really awesome write!



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